Reviews for Years at War, Part 1: Triwizard Warfare |
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csheila chapter 20 . 6/21 Sorry, I don’t like it |
csheila chapter 19 . 6/21 Sucks. Fix it |
csheila chapter 18 . 6/21 Damn, I better see some major ass kicking next chapter |
csheila chapter 17 . 6/21 Great change up to story. Hope Ced makes it |
csheila chapter 16 . 6/21 Pretty spectacular way to expose Dumbledore’s trick. Great job. So pensieve’s rare in your world. Explains a lot. |
csheila chapter 15 . 6/21 Gets deadly |
csheila chapter 14 . 6/21 Clever and different. Harry acts like a survivor in your story. He analyzes his abuse all the time looking for workarounds. |
csheila chapter 13 . 6/21 Could we hope that everyone forgot about Moron |
csheila chapter 12 . 6/21 Got a bad feeling about this one. Harry should help rescue other three before getting Moron |
csheila chapter 11 . 6/21 Enjoyed the ball |
csheila chapter 10 . 6/21 Like this earlier meeting with Umbitch. Interesting to see if house switching allowed. |
csheila chapter 9 . 6/21 Nice twist up to plot. Glad Harry seeks what he wants like Sirius. Even if he loses tried. Too often in canon he came across as whiny not assertive. But then JKR was grooming us as well to accept the deaths and horrible EWE (not just pairings but Harry continuing to sacrifice) |
csheila chapter 8 . 6/21 Can’t imagine why no one has tipped Harry off to mind reading. Good point on showing Ron’s “stupidity” merely a means to get things for free |
csheila chapter 7 . 6/21 Nice, I like how your Harry is standing firm. He has been hurt enough. Disappointed a bit in Hermione but she respects authority too much. Though 4 years at Hogwarts should have cured it |
csheila chapter 6 . 6/21 Interesting about pensive since Dumbles relies on it. Nice take on Goblin magic But he is ignoring Hermione too much |