Reviews for Harry Potter and The Veela
Deehan Haq chapter 25 . 7/21
This story is pretty well written. I hope there will be more updates.
Archleone chapter 4 . 7/15
Harry should see a doctor about all this passing out the moment he gets near a bed.

Also, Quiddich has to be one of the most boring things to talk about in HP fan fiction.
SupaChenz AA chapter 25 . 7/10
When will you update?
Guest chapter 4 . 7/4
Woh this is amazing
WithinTheMadness chapter 25 . 6/17
Ok well played... ish... on Taylor. Buuut... still wtf. Talk about your left turns. Not even a hint before chapter 24, then h-bomb. Sheesh
WithinTheMadness chapter 24 . 6/17
Harsh, yes, but wtf? Uhhh... wow. Just gonna... what? Most of this chapter falls under wtf. And you've all but dropped the Taylor plot. And added a dozen new ones without preamble. Wow. Ouch.
FanFicKing3245 chapter 2 . 6/12
“Snuggling a dragon out of the castle.” Best typo I’ve seen on this site.
JD4320 chapter 25 . 6/10
such a great story so far. hope one day you decide to continue on with. live the oc's you have created! such an ending in chap 25. gave me goosebumps!
Guest chapter 12 . 6/6
Story is fantastic and oddly I enjoy this story with a good malfoy Family and the little sister
RatherFabulous chapter 25 . 6/2
Oh wow, you've thrown us a very hot potato, and then you retreated to other realms.
Well. Despite the occasional "mental edit", it was an interesting ride.
I've added it to my follow list, should you ever continue it.
Be well, be safe, and remember!
1. Don't feed the trolls.
2. Real Life comes FIRST.
3. If they're not paying you, their whining is absolutely irrelevant.
RatherFabulous chapter 12 . 6/2
...hope he doesn't emulate George Best in ALL things. That was really sad, and it's a hard, miserable way to go.
Had a family member that finally, on a lonely Christmas Eve (lonely by his choice, not ours) decided to just get it over with and drink the world. It actually took him 2 weeks to die. He was a little younger than George Best was.
RatherFabulous chapter 5 . 6/1
Is this your life? Do your parents, drink, do drugs, hurl abusive epithets at you and neglect you?
If that's the case, I'm sorry. It happens. I've seen too much of it.

At first, I was terribly irritated with "Emo-Harry", and decided that if he started to cut himself, listen to throwback bands like "My Chemical Romance", or dating D'arkness Dementia Raven Way, I was gonna run.
When he referred to Rosie as "the only person who loves me back.", I kinda felt sorry for Sirius and Remus. I'm glad they couldn't hear him say that. Young people can often be thoughtless.

I've known people who've grown up with neglectful, selfish parents. It IS hard. It's NOT fair. (Damn you, A*****, for your treatment of my niece. What is WRONG with you!? Oh yeah, you're an alcohol-sodden bint who favours the kid who looks like YOU while berating the kid who looks like my brother.)
Eventually, the child will often cobble together something of a relationship, usually a bit stilted and distant, with their parents, because, well...it's their PARENTS. There will usually be a tiny germ buried deeeeep that still wants them to love them and to accept them.
It's never what is should have been, but sometimes it does get better, or at least tolerable. Sort of. The pain will always be there, but you find people to love, make a good life for yourself, and steer clear of your genetic donors.

/sigh. Okay. At 15, I'd say he has every right to his immature rant. It's just that your Harry is overly "uber" at everything. I wish, for him, for my niece, for my cousin, and for two of my friends, for a friend's daughter-in-law, that the world was fair, that some people were better parents, and that we could be all better at this as well.
RatherFabulous chapter 1 . 6/1
Uh...his mom asked him if she could go with him. I'm gonna need more reason for him to be full-on hater here. I mean, it's his MOM.

Everyone wants their parents to love them when they're little, and even when they're older and the cycle of abuse has become more apparent. (I have a family member whose mom was a sociopath.) Even when you've had years of it, it's hard to shake the desire for them to just love you. I see her trying here, and not being ugly.

Must be a helluva back story.
miguel.puentedejesus chapter 15 . 5/26
Maravilloso!
Me Encanto!
Perfecto
miguel.puentedejesus chapter 14 . 5/26
Exquisito!
Me Encanto!
Maravilloso
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