as a writing teacher for middle school students, it's very hard to comment on this story. as a writer/author, I think you're an amazing writer and you should definitely keep it up! as Teen Titans fan, I fuckin' love you, you're amazing.

It is interesting to see what Richard would do in his spare time with his girl - like a window into the boy/man behind the mask. Once again, I love it! :D

Wow. This story is so graphic: it makes me feel guilty to watch this descriptive piece, like I'm actually in the moment. I love it! My breath is officially taken.. :D

I love this, parts of it are sexy, parts of it are cute, but overall it's just realistic. I love how the sex isn't strictly romantic- sometimes it's just a way to seek comfort with the one you love most by being as close to them as you possibly can. Great story!

Hey, if I'm not too embarrassed to WRITE an 'M', I sure as heck don't mind reviewing one! And I've written several.

Would he really be THAT upset? He voluntarily took on the persona of Nightwing. He was DONE with Robin.

Still ... there's a lot to be said for smooth-over sex.

I'm dropping this into Favorites.

Well THAT was just completely perfect. Such a series of relations would be ENTIRELY within character for them ... especially that first one, laced as it was with almost violent need.

I also deeply appreciate your careful attention to orthography. That's a rarity in fan-fiction.

wow

Well, you haven't updated in a year, but I liked this.

I hope you get the chance to continue :)

Incredible! Very vivid descriptions and phenomenal representations of the characters, especially combining information from the cartoon and the comics :) I especially like that it wasn't simply fluff, but a variety of situations that would make sense in the stream of their relationship, it's superb writing! If you would take it- I believe that in the comic they end up getting married, and then later divorced. If you're still into writing this story now, you could maybe do something for both of those situations? ; Just a small request

um . . . that was like the HOTTEST THING EVER. SERIOUSLY. WRITE "erotic novels" - YOU'D BE A MILLIONAIRE. Rooftop sex? Perfect for them!

Ahhhhh, I love this fic 3 I'm so excited for the next update! You write them so well (:

This was really beautiful.

I love the way you described these three different moments. You really captured the difference between the different types of sex that someone can have. It also described their relationship perfectly I feel more so than just writing out bluntly how they felt.

Ending with him telling her his true identity was even better.

I like how you mixed comics/cartoon here with their relationship being more like in the comics here but with her only knowing him as Robin like in the cartoon.

Okay. I thought this was going to be a a good trashing on Robin and Starfire's relationship, a constructive one but a thrashing none the less. But no, you surprised me, I really like this, this is a pretty good look at how things could have happened and it is superbly written. Great job building the relationship without drawing it out too much. Seriously, great job.

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Ayake Rin

D'aww! Very nice contrast between all three sections, beautiful vivid descriptions. This was very sweet. You really captured their intimacy well.

Aw this is amazing, you really are a brilliant writer! I love how it's not always fluffy and romantic between Robin and Starfire, and how you kept it all really simple, aw my fav part was probably when he told her his name cause it was just simple and romantic.