Every time I read this, this chapter just gets to me. I have no choice but to cry, I love reading things that can evoke such emotion though. Thank you for writing this! 3

It was like Tarzan but better without the jungle problems excelent, your story was beautiful.
Thanks for your time
Regards
LQUEZ

I loved this story, different sort of premise, well told. The language difference didn't seem to hinder them at all! Thanks for sharing.

Okay your math skills are awful. AWFUL. In chapter 1, you first said Ben was 3 years older than Bella and then mentioned that he's 23 years old. By that I calculated Bella was 20 years old. Now you're saying Bella is 22?

This was a lovely wedding, again, could have be ok without Renee, she was a dipsey-doole...I'm glad Edward got one more time in the woods with the wolf. Him as as a dad was priceless.
Well I've left you my thoughts along the way to thank you for keeping this lovely story here for me to find.
Thank you too for taking the time to acknowledge my reviews. All the best.

Having Renee show up at this point, I could have done without her. I mean Bella doesn't seem to have wanted a relationship with her flighty mom so I get why she waited all this time.
I'm assuming they'll get married in the woods where they met? If it's only going to be the McCarty's I suppose a wedding far into the woods ought to be nice.

Oh this was such a tiny tease of Edward's POV.

Goes to show you what a good story teller you are because I want more details about the life of these two. Sad there's only a few more epi's. So twins, I guess these two will even have parenthood a challenge with two at once. I take it then that for these three years Bella was in fact on birth control, and that was wise. But it's nice to see that they are at a place where Edward understands the true meaning of family and is going to propose to Bella. I'm wondering if he ever goes back to visit with the wolves. Oh and I like that Officer Black took the effort to find some items that belonged to Edward's family, the family crest being put on Edward's furniture creations is awesome.

Oh this can't be the end. I want to see the process of Edward finding out who he was and who his family was and what becomes of him and Bella. Anyway, good to know Officer Black was a good guy. I hope he helps them.

What a jerk officer Black turned out to be if he's the one who alerted the media.

Aww, Edward's goodbye visit with his former wolf family was sad. But I think, if they think at all, that he's not welcome not only because they've moved on but that he really isn't of their world and since now he's found someone like him, they are letting him go. Maybe this is just what Edward needs, some closure to his former wolf family and that he now realizes he doesn't belong there anymore and will make even more of an effort to fit in and grow within Bella's world.

So many questions...Does Edward have artistic talent? Does Bella? Why did her thoughts linger on past art experiences with Renee? And what is Edward dreaming about? And what and when will Emmett/Rosalie help get Edward some medical and documentation? So much ahead.

Seeing Edward have some purpose is so good. Emmett seems like a good father figure. I think that although Rosalie and Emmett hired Bella for her help, I think they are going to be the ones to help them.

Oh no, standing there bloody...did he kill the chickens? Way past time to tell the McCarty's who Edward is and what's happened to him.

Oh Edward in the chicken coop. Of course he'd sense they were food for the taking, he's a hunter after all. I knew the McCary's would be understanding of Edward but I think Bella should have at least communicated with them about Edward being 'limited' without having to tell the whole story just yet. This is their property and she should have been honest up front. By Rosalie looking out at the couple and seeing Edward on all fours and yet seeming unfazed, I wonder if she knows 'something'...