Your favourite pairing is a teenage girl and grown man? That's disgusting!

you can't leave it like that...

10/10

I just read the reviews & have to say that 'concerned reader' is an idiot.
Don't let that review demotivate you! ( though the ones talking about grammar have merit... :P )

Oh mah gerd I love Hei so much and ship him to death with Suou she a firecracker that is too adorable to pass by! I love him with Yin too but Suou just sticks better with me oh the struggles Hei has to go through with his ladies man give the dude a break! Anyways I loved it it's perfection and touched yet hurt my feels he bettah go get his boo back pls! In the third season pls bring mah baby girl Suou back I'll turn up to no end and now I shall go binge watch Darker Than Black when I wake up in the morning! Great work truly loved it amazing kudos just yassssss xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo thank chu so much for writing dissss! X)

Hey there. I think you really have someting here. The story is good and the characters are well thought out and true to the origionals. However what ruined the moment was the bad grammar. You should think about using a beta reader. The talent is there, so keep writing!

It was good and honestly i also like Hei x suou.

i Love you for this :D

incorrect grammar, bad dialogue , OOC, and no smut warning.(there must always be a smut warning so that way people that could get triggered by that stuff know it's there doesn't matter if the story's rated M, it's like writing a story/oneshot with self-harm, anorexia, bulimia etc etc) I suggest going back over and maybe redoing some parts, some places are very choppy and awkward sounding with the characters. Good luck with writing.

Greeaat... I love stories like this.

Beautiful.

Look concerned reader, it's rated M for a reason. Most of the time it's gonna have sex or violence so don't review if you're not going to say something nice. Little kids won't read it if its rated M so don't go hating. I at least loved your story and I can't wait to see the sequel :)
Angels and Devils

there better be a third season, the manga is still going... I still can't believe you made Hei a pedophile, even if I love the pairing

WHAT THE FUDGE IS WRONG WITH U?!
when u write porn online u need to at least make a warning! and plus she has feelings for july and plus shes like 13-18 why the heck would she be having sex with a 25 year old?! im sorry but this is totally OOC and ur a disgusting writer i can understand if u just put and the next day but going all detail and plus just cuz u go out and have sex with someone doesnt mean u "love" them it means ur a complete and idiotic retard im sorry i dont like posting reviews like this but u should be ashamed for writing this idc who u are u dont go around making stories like this and posting iy online dont try the "it was my first story" excuse because i dont think ANYBODY writes porn for a first story and besides u just have a sick little mind i hope ur happy that little kids might of read this im sorry for the very very very rude review but could u at least put a warning next time and dont just put a weird summary! thanks :(

So beautiful. So erotic. I totally like this story, especially the french kissing.

Wow. Very nice. I like it.