Will this story ever be continued? It's well crafted, if a little numb with some information, and is probably the best crossover of Harry Potter on this website.

Thor is not a German god, that's more common knowledge than Mercury being the Roman god of Thievery, Messengers, Speed, and Travelers.

This is great story! Shame it was not updated for so long. Hope that it will be updated soon!

This jumps around far too much.

Telling a story is not an easy thing to do when it's done in a linear fashion. Telling one that jumps timelines, realms and merges multiple different fandoms causes the difficulty to increase exponentially. And then double that when you want to make it a GOOD story.

Your problem here is that everything is a jagged, fragmented mess in an attempt to show the reader how everything truly does fit together. And it doesn't matter how well crated this plot is if its actual story is a mess that leaves the reader unsure as to anything that's happening.

This is a highly ambitious story and if you were ever to think of trying to pick it up again (or rewrite it), I would highly suggest writing the thing in a much more linear fashion with all the extra stuff thrown in as flavouring here and there. Infodumps and plot points aren't the same as enjoyable story.

This has been one of the absolute best fic's I have ever read that expanded my mind and taught me about various cultures and their various histories! Absolutely loved the connections made and the details you have gone thru. Thank you so much for writing this. It truly is a work of passion. Hooked me in and totally loved being taken on the journey.

As soon as I reached the end, I realized that this was last updated 6 years ago! :( Its doubtful that this will be finished but still hoping... :)

Once again, thank you for sharing this amazing work.

I haven't actually read the last chapter but skimmed through them hoping they somehow stabilize to a starting point from cannon. But I have realized that unless you have overdosed on crack that this story has no relation to canon whatsoever. Between the time jumps and not knowing where this story is starting from I have not been able to start actually reading the story because of confusion. Maybe you could give some sort of explanation as to what is going on before the first chapter? I am sorry but this is supposed to be a Harry Potter fanfic with recognizable characters. So far from what I have skimmed I am not sure I recognize anyone even thought they share names. I am sorry but I don't think I can actually read this story.

wow. this story gripped me in a way I haven't felt since reading the illuminati. it is torment that there is no more to read. i hope RL permits another installment soon. thank you very much for writing

I'm assuming this story has been abandoned since it hasn't been updated in over 4 years, and that's a shame. Yes, you provided a lot of extra information that may not necessarily have been needed, and doesn't always make for easy reading, but I will admit that I would not have understood how you were tying all these different concepts together without it. I am sad that the story stopped just after the Gentle One arrived, but before we learn who she is, and before Dumbles and Voldie, as well as the Black Coats, have been taken down. Dumbles is just cra-cra, and I don't understand why no one gets that. Surely those he hasn't potioned should be able to see how unstable he is. While some are starting to open their eyes, many are not. I can only assume it is due to their having been potioned into compliance in the past. I was enjoying this story, and if I had known it would stop in the middle, probably wouldn't have started reading it. It's bothersome when stories never get finished. I hope your muse returns and you finish this some day. Thanks for sharing!

It started really good. Fairy tale themed and portrayed a different Voldemort and more complex magic system. Intriguing characters and fan service.

But.
It quickly devolved into an infodump. Back to back block of infodumps and glaring plot holes pockmarked with useless info with excessive fan service.
Lets yoga - insert 95% of chapter worth of info dump - gets naked and start shagging

Lets not forget how Dumbledore was portrayed like some psychedelic hippie goat on quaaludes. I mean come on, i know this is supposed to be slightly comical because of the theme but your Dumbledore is too excessive.

Its really easy to get into the hype but looking back, the story probably wouldn't reach 50k words without the excessive use of infodump and plagiarism.

Too much infodump. Skipped most of the things that didn't catch my attention, but damn, i like this fae themed version

hey you

I like all the myths and stuff about the gods and the fairy tells and all... So I hope this isn't abandonned as it seems to be... which would be quite sad. Yet I understand that life can get in the way of writing... so I'm hoping you might find the time somewhere in the future to write on again

JM

Such a very good build up. It seems such a loss that this looks to have been abandoned. Hopefully some day in the future you might pick it back up.

Wow, I am *loving* this story! I hope you get a chance to continue it. Thanks for sharing it with us.

A fic where monogamous marriage is not only mocked, but decried as illogical. Interesting.

Wow, his secretary is really taking killing him with kindness to heart.