Reviews for Bite Me
Addison chapter 9 . 3/29/2019
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo, it was getting so good! ;(
nenadstaji chapter 9 . 11/9/2017
Now it's november of 2017 and still no chapter 10
Hynamia Rivaille chapter 9 . 10/15/2017
This fanfiction is quite good. I was disappointed really that this was discontinued like since almost six years ago. But anyway, thanks for the wonderful plotline and you've brought me out of my boredom.
gearblade chapter 9 . 9/9/2016
good
Left4Gamez chapter 5 . 2/25/2016
Erm, there's a lot of spelling and grammar errors in this. Aside from that, it's still very well written in terms of story.
Guest chapter 9 . 11/7/2015
Sooooo sad!
Guest chapter 9 . 3/27/2015
:'( I read it too fast now I have to wait... D:
Guest chapter 3 . 3/27/2015
Gotta love dat ending bro!
Left4Gamez chapter 9 . 12/29/2014
ADD. FLIPPING. COMMA'S! OMFG! AND FIX THE TYPOS! ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Left4Gamez chapter 4 . 12/29/2014
OH MY GOD! WHY!? I CAN'T READ IF THE STORY DOESN'T HAVE GOOD PUNCTUATION! ADD SOME COMMA'S!
Left4Gamez chapter 3 . 12/29/2014
wow, good story and all so far, but I advise for you to make the paragraphs smaller/skinnier, like not as long.
Guest chapter 9 . 9/17/2014
Write another chapter please
madmaka chapter 9 . 6/30/2014
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finceline chapter 5 . 6/18/2014
and she realizes she loves finn than finn watches everyone he loves die for dozens of years while she spends her ays crying unable to stop and then he finds her murdered then commits suicide and her dad has a heart attack and a stroke at the same time when he finds out and he dies
luvme0987 chapter 9 . 11/29/2013
PLEASE CONTINUE!
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