I could cry :'( why have you not continued?!

you need to soon so your reads can read the next capter

its like playing the game again with all the original dialog :) really liking this bout time someone did another DAvidXRush story :)

I like the chapter even though it's short. Nice idea of making the 'holding hands' scene. Well I will give you some OC's later and I hope you'll like them. Can't wait for the next chapter. :D

Excelent work, if you want you can use some of my OCs. Keep up the good work!

Ah! So this is going to follow the game's story, but from Rush's perspective. I can't wait to read your interpretation of the events. And it helps that you write pretty well too.

I think this is going to be awesome :D Please update soon!

This is so great! Nice with adding some dialogues to the story. It did add more sense. Though I am confused about the monster scene. Weren't they fighting a Jhana before the large Raptor that fell down on the ground from high up? But either way it still is great. Keep it up! :D

AWESOME! Nice way of narrating the story and I can't wait till it gets all epic and romantic. Please update as fast as you can! :D

Yukiko: Wait, so this is basically the game... but told in Rush's point of view and Dave and Rush ends up together? Hmm, interesting. I'm looking forward to this new insight of The Last Remnant game. Update soon.

~Yukiko Shiroryuu~