i love it :D

this stoty is very good. i liked it when you made Shin act like any child would istead of like a god. you put more funny parts in cause it's missin' funny.

AW! so cute! (sry. i'm new here. i don't know what else 2 say. -_-U

I read these Kaioshin Saga stories over and over and over. XD I must tell you, you're writing and ideas are mature, well-written, and beautiful. I know that you end it at 3 stories, but I'd love to see other side stories following these characters and plots. :)

Hehehe...I finished reading this when was down, so I couldn't place a review. I just thought I'd tell you that I really enjoyed it.

This fic is really good, but it is kind of long, but I liked it. On a scale of 1 through 10 i give it 9 out of 10.

Great story, sometimes Shin can be quite a pain in the butt. I like it.

I love it, this is an awesome fic!

WOW, I really like this story! It's probably the best depiction of Shin's life that I have read! I love the total descriptions. Now, on to the next chapter...

WAAAAAAH! it's over noooooooo

ahem...what an ending so sweet. I love the way that you always have twists in your fics, makes it extremly intersting, Kibito/Shins dad huh? like father like son eh?

That was a very moving and touching ending, but I still can't believe it's over *sniff*

A very unique fic in many ways, the originality and emotion was great, and I've really enjoyed reading it...A LOT

That was an amazing fic *cheers loudly*

one question for ya...HOW DID THAT SUCK? that was an amazing chapter, I LOVED IT, awwww so sad in parts, poor Kee, it wasn't her fault.

I really liked the bit about Kibito's past, there are very few fics that give any possible ideas of him when he was younger, and I really liked that element of it.

This chapter was really well written and just...er...great, going to read the next bit in a munute

TTYS

"It is time for the questioning to take start" (either take place, or just start)

"emotions of what happen" (happened)

"that had laid dormant for so long" (lain dormant)

"are a unwanted" (an unwanted)

"misplacement" (displacement, and even that doens't quite fit)

"bring her comfort to her" (forget the first her)

These were the major statements that I thought you might want to fix a little. In some cases, there are words that aren't words, improper grammer and what have you. There were a couple others that I stumbled over, but these were the major ones.

OTHER than these problems, the rest of the story was magnificent.

Excellent foreshadowing, good use of the language, VERY good descriptions of both physical and emotional elements, believable dialogue, and every so often, a faint sense of importance. You've managed to cut out most of the parts of previous chapters that I objected to, and add in some real emotion, and the creepy forebooding, that comes with a chapter just before something important happens.

So CONGRATULATIONS! If the other chapters are as good as this one, I'm in for a real treat!

Although I will say one other slight problem. More a personal problem than anything else, but I felt it needed mentioning. How you continuously describe his sister, it's a little... boring? uncertain? repetative? I'm not sure... but there's something not quite right about it, it doesn't really make me afraid/hate bibidi and buu. Not to mention the fact that the third person is probably dabura. Oh well.

Anyways, VERY good... WOOHOO! Keep it up!

Arthur E. King

Yay, I loved it! Great work Kaeli _

Very good, Kaeli. Loved it.

Aww...so cute! *G*

This is creepy, 'Shin's dad has a relationship w/Kibito in this fic...and in one of my upcoming ones, he has one with 'Shin's mom! :) (NOT an O/C, BTW...)

I loved this fic...*sigh*

-Rivka