I just wanted to say that you did a really good job considering that you were only 14 when you wrote it.

I just...I kinda want to squeal and cry at the same time right now, I've loved this story from the very beginning. This chapter, oh damn this chapter, there are no words to describe my feelings for this chapter...I give you all the cookies in the land.

You have to continue with this story!

I enjoyed reading this story but was very disappointed to find out the story hasn't been updated in several years. Please consider finishing your story.

I sympathize with Dian. But only a VERY little bit. Like, less than 5%.

Why'd you call it telepathy? The way I see it, it seems like empathy. Sarah's not reading other people's thought's-except Jareth's-, but she IS projecting her emotions on to them.

*groans* Can we just get rid of Dian already? Please?

I LOVE PotO! I just watched the movie version with Gerard Butler yesterday! *sings* Pitiful creature of darkness, what kind of life have known? God give courage me to show you, you are not alone!

*referring to the last line* Isn't THAT deja vu?

Ok. So, you can be cruel. . Jareth just saw her headstone, and now I'm bawling my eyes out.

I just wanted to say, that was well written. Thanks for taking the time to post.

Hurry

Huh, I'm glad to know you're back...it's been what? Almost a year... Anyway, I guess it's okay you're back now, just glad to have this story finally finished...eventually.

Please Please Please give us the last chapter soon!

But chapter 6 is nicely revised, Kudos for that.

one more chapter please

up date! up date please! I just love the story and am in suspended animation waiting now...

What does she mean?! Truely amazing story, cant wait for the next chapter!

This story is powerful with emotion and the way you write it makes me feel like I am living in it .I am not ready for it to end but when it is the last chapter I am sure it will be beautifully written.