Nice job.

I was listening to drake: I'm so proud of you, it went surprisingly good with it love the story

O.k, i have 1 thing to say: WHAT? Kinda weird, i want to understand it but i cant! ):

Amazing story! Poor Mordecai D': Great work1

this gave me chills! beautifully written, and so tragic ')

This was written very well and I felt satisfied at the end, not easy to do with a one-shot. Great job!

My my my... what an interesting take on that episode. I must say that this was well written and extremely engaging. I actually did a double take when you got to the whole twist of the story. Very sad, but hopeful. It leaves a pit in your stomach, but puts a smile on your face. Loved it! Really good job man! I only noticed one or two mistakes, but they didn't take away from the story.

Great story!

i liked this story a lot! Really descriptive words! Add on soon