Great story although with the way Kona said he was related to Naruto that would make them cousins other then that and a few grammar mistakes here and there, this has a pretty good plot so far.

You need a beta-reader to help with your sentence structure. Your readers need to be able to understand what you are trying to say without having to read the same part over and over again. Kushina is Naruto's mother. Other than that, I'm interested in your story. It's very unique.

Hey you have a great story. Liking the things that are happening. Though I feel like things are moving to fast. I understand that the situation you've given the characters to deal with they wouldn't have much time to discuss. I think if you just slow down maybe focus a bit more in character development. Let us get a feel for these new characters your adding so we can really imagine the wonderful story you are presenting us. Lots of love and looking forward to more. Until next time! .

I enjoyed it

cool

this is so good :)

Great story looking forward to next chap

Can't wait till next chap plz.

i like your plot and you have a few grammer mistakes, but otherwise really good cant wait to see what happens next

Can't wait till next chap

Keep going

Interesting

Good job

Keep it up

Good story it is different