Wow. That was so epic. You really went into detail about what a tribute would think about as they died. Usually people write it like they can see the family laughing or crying, but nobody ever writes that maybe a tribute is regretting their behavior and is thinking they should have been was a nice addition, and I loved every word of it. It was DRIPPING with sadness and anger and pain, and I felt like I was standing there right next to that dying tribute, watching. It was so vivid, and so easy to see into the world of the character you've set up.

I really enjoy your poignant scenes. And you're quite good at death scenes XD

I think it was really Amazing! It isn't JUST like Blizzard of Emotions! It's similar, but not the same! Good story, still angry as a... Pear Bear with no Pear! There, ha...

This is REALLY amazing. It's so clever and sad. I love your stories! I've read this, kill or be killed and starting gnawing hunger. You are amazing!

P.S. Love the name!

I actually did enjoy it. Really good up the good work!

mate, that was so good! I'm jealous of your awesome skills! Very dramatic and it took a good perpective of a dying tribute (:

Love your stories. Really good writing! By the way, tell me your feelings on Gale after Mockingjay

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Dramatic. Very dramatic. I love it!

Wow. I think I almost cried when I read this. Your a really good writer. :)