Reviews for The Robbery |
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derektomlinson chapter 1 . 10/21/2019 videl hissing saying to sayianman are you kidding me your dad trained with krillen under the old pervert master roshi it s ok i would rather have my lying boyfriend train me than have that pervert run around smelling my panties gohan saying to videl how many times do i have to say that i am sorry for not saying that i was sayianman and the super sayian that you met outside the bank for lying to you videl hissing saying to son gohan remember what i had said when you was going to give me that senzu bean i said that i trust you Why DIDN'T YOU JUST TRUST ME WITH YOUR SECRETS WITH YOUR HEART LET ME BE YOUR GIRLFRIEND YES GOHAN I LOVE YOU |
Derek chapter 1 . 5/4/2019 Videl to gohan i see that you invite any girl you just met back to your apartment and I will be the first and last girl you will ever invite back to your apartment got it wink |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/27/2016 I'm wondering who the jerk is the videl father is making her go out with. Maybe you should have that jerk that videl father forcing her to go out with meet them in the gym with her father there. They have an fight and the jerk loses to gohan. Then make her farther tell that jerk to leave her alone and let videl decide who she wants which we all know is gohan. when are you going to update again. |
thedarkpirateking chapter 1 . 6/4/2015 please update soon i love very much |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2015 I hope you continue this story. |
RapingBagels chapter 1 . 9/10/2014 YOU SHOULD MAKE THIS INTO A STORY |
SuperSaiyan2Chris chapter 1 . 2/21/2014 Please continue writing this story its really interesting and I want to keep reading and know what happens |
RatedRSuperStar87 chapter 1 . 6/3/2011 nice story so far update soon. |
Damex chapter 1 . 5/8/2011 great first chapter and good story |
dbzfan98 chapter 1 . 5/7/2011 When r u going to update |
ferduran chapter 1 . 4/22/2011 looks interesting in special the interest about Roshi, hope to see more in the next chap, bye |
Kurami Rocket chapter 1 . 4/19/2011 This was pretty good start. I know I would hate a guy picked out for me, but then who wouldn't. Update soon! I want to see how Gohan and Videl will get close! |
XAuthoress.ExtraordinaireX chapter 1 . 4/15/2011 He actually has a house in the city? I thought he was making it up... ANYWAY, great story! Continue, I'd like to see where it goes! Lilly 8) |
MysticGohan87 chapter 1 . 4/14/2011 They r starting 2 like each other a bit fast but thats all good... Great story so far! hope to see it continued :) |
NANLIT chapter 1 . 4/14/2011 So Gohan does have an apartment in the city. I thouht he was lying. Interesting. I like how confortable he is about talking about at least some of his past/connections. Kinda surprised Videl wasn't shocked by him mentioning being trained by Piccolo. Does no one remember King Piccolo anymore? Also, is anyone making a big deal about the "Gold Fighter"? |