Good story

this needs a second chapter

Good..

I love it. Ben really is a genius. Getting himself in trouble making Gwen share the blame, then absolving her in front of the principle, making her indebted to him, all so she will agree to go with him to the dance. I salute you, you wrote a batman gambit or was it a xanatos gambit, not really sure. Well done!

Adorable. You do great on all of your shorts.

There is an obvious deception trait that Ben demonstrates, which is just like him. Their antics are extremely loving and just pure bliss and sinless. Too bad the big bad world is so cruel to its inhabitants.

I don't need to be the one to say you are a preferred writer to me and many people - but I want to.

LOL! I couldn't stop giggling. This is too cute! And I could totally see this happening in the show.

Good Job

-TJ

Love it. Short, cute and BWEN :D

Well, I think this is a good one. To me it was beautifully worded, the dialogue and interaction flawless. I have to say doing justice to the characters seems to be a strength of yours. To tell the truth, I don't think anyone could have written this better. Kudos. Hope to read more from you. Keep rockin.