| Reviews for Ribbons |
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   Rose-Aki chapter 1 . 2/20/2016 Loved the way you described Neji slicing Tenten's ribbons to see her with her hair open. Good story :) |
| Animefangirl95 chapter 1 . 5/31/2012 Aww that was sweet haha |
| xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 1 . 12/17/2011 Hehe I like it |
| ZoXon chapter 1 . 8/18/2011 Such a cute story w |
| kenzinator chapter 1 . 4/22/2011 Aww...That was super cute! :D |
| Lana0605 chapter 1 . 4/21/2011 So sweet ! Love it ! |
| Love Is Only a Word chapter 1 . 4/21/2011 Great story! |
| pretzel monster chapter 1 . 4/20/2011 You have potential. The pacing is nice and rhythmic, the descriptions are enough, but there's something lacking in the sentences. Try wording the others better and see which version of it is better. Like I'm to talk. xDD I can't avoid criticism, even though I'm still unexperienced (considering my age...XD) - but please don't misunderstand! I loved this. Too much, maybe. Keep on writing! :D |
| pisceanchic101 chapter 1 . 4/19/2011 Nice story. |
| I C Y U R O K chapter 1 . 4/19/2011 that was sweet and awesome.:D |
| Killer of thy Cookies chapter 1 . 4/19/2011 Cute! Go NejiTen! I think Tenten looks hot with her hair down too ) ~Killer of thy Cookies, Kook |
| Princess Tyler Briefs chapter 1 . 4/17/2011 Hey, this is ode2sokka from deviantart. I want to say this is an awesome little story :D. It is fun and light-hearted with all my favorite bits of NejiTen- TenTen winning a sparring match, first kisses, and Neji seeing her hair down for the first time. Thanks for the little story, it's great! |
| Dreaming101 chapter 1 . 4/17/2011 Very cute :} Definitely continue to write more nejiten awesomeness! :D ~Dreaming101 |
| kierstyn chapter 1 . 4/16/2011 omg you should take this plot and make it a chapter book |
| XxNeONxX chapter 1 . 4/16/2011 ohmigosh that was so kawaiiiiii! and totally hot. loved it :) |
