Either Ichigo or Luffy, maybe both. Also please continue this.

i hope you will release another chapter for this soon
as for your question how about Natsu from Fairy tail?

The story is ok but you need to update kore often. Aside from that i cant think of anything to say so i'll just do the poll. I say have goku and ichigo as his brothers.

Did you forget about naruto and goku twin terrors or did you discontinue it

the story is great so far! I think you should make it an OC.

Name: Yuki (meaning happiness; good fortune; snow)

Gender: Male

Age: a year younger than Naruto (don't know exact age)

Looks: he is 5"6 red hair (from mother) to his shoulders covers one eye. one blue eye and one red eye that is covered. he wears dark clothing like Sasuke.

(the rest is your decision to use)

Bio: Being born a year after Naruto, he wasn't given the full responsibility to govern the nine tails. Yuki was born a normal boy living with Naruto for as long as he's been alive until he was stuck down by some kids at the school. Traces of the nine tails chakara existed in his common blue chakara. Yuki and Naruto have a close family bond with each other. He can be taken for as a village enemy for some people, Kakashi was contimplating taking him and sasuke as apprentices...

(feel free to edit him, sorry if im late on this)

lol this is the longest chapter

Count me in. And if the CAN'T make an MA filter, they can at least do something else:

A) censor the lemon scenes manually (or delete ONLY the lemon scenes if needed but keep the story)

B) MOVE the stories to an MA fanfiction site, providing an extension to the site as well

C) chapter one states that the story contains themes and such not suitable for minors

Please try to make the story longer than the comments in the beginning.

please update.

I think his siblings should be ruri from martian successor nedesko. I think she would be good for this position because she is almost the polar opposite from naruto but they do have some similarities. as such this is who I cast my vote for and I hope you take into consideration for the rest of your story. as for the rest of your story I like how it's working out but I'm not so sure he should have killed 3 people right off the bat I know you're going to revive and heal thon but still it's just a little cruel. I was in the points I brought up it's a great story but I wish you would of made the key you be a little bit nicer.

Dude this is kinda cool. I wanna for with all the above please. XD

Awesome I didn't know Kakashi had Chidori. I'll PM you some ideas I have.

Really enjoyed this fanfic, well written and good detail i cant wait for more. I hope you post again soon.

I want more! I really am enjoying the fanfic but the kyuubi talk bit felt somewhat rushed, in terms of abilities I have some ideas

telekinesis? dark chakra? a new sharingan? the ability to slow time?

or maybe for naruto somthing I refer to as

blade magic :D -total nerd basically the character controls things all sharp and pointy and can make glowing white swords appear (and shoot) out of thin air so basically

I.e. Naruto spun dodging the kunai and kicked twice sending two great cones of blades headed for...

so yeah :P thats my ideas but don't let anyone become overpowered.

try to have a good Sasuke but not ooc and try to not bash Sakura overly so, she still dislikes Naruto and should pay for it but she should develop like a normal person.

anyway I hope the review helped, cause I put a lot of effort into it!

aww that is bull right at the most suspenseful point