Reviews for The Incredibles: Dark Knights |
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foxytigerbabe89 chapter 1 . 3/10/2019 WTFisbatmandoinghere? |
DC Watchergirl chapter 16 . 7/11/2018 Well I love this story the way it is. Sorry you had a lot of braty comments. I get them some times on my stories and it's no fun. Still, this is really cool! And I'm actually glad Batman is an OC. It works better in the story and makes things more interesting and gives you the liberty to make him do things that Bruce wouldn't that really are important in the story. Also Batwoman was AWESOME. And their relationship is PERFECT for what a sibling relationship should be. I should know I'm in one. :) 3 |
Obsidian Prime chapter 16 . 6/19/2018 It's disappointing to see people who have their head so far up their asses you could take a gun and show them, tell them, and even shoot their genitals they still would have no idea what you are talking about. (Stupid people PISS. ME. OFF.) |
MultiFandomTrash-6 chapter 16 . 6/19/2018 I loved this Au story. Hope you do more. You did an amazing job at writing this. |
Knox chapter 16 . 6/8/2018 If there was a cast list could you write it on DeviantArt |
jon12231223 chapter 16 . 4/8/2018 need more |
Guest chapter 12 . 11/13/2017 AWWW YEAH! The calvary, has arrived! It’s party time now baby! Time to Hero up. |
TercesTardis chapter 1 . 2/5/2017 Nice twist making Batman a teenager. Saw what you did there: "Mr. Bane". The funny thing was the cartoon Batman was playing on the tv as I was reading this. |
Doominater84 chapter 1 . 12/4/2015 This is a really fantastic story! If you're still rewriting it my criticism would be to work on the grammar and what I find to be an overuse of CAPS. I think some of you're decisions were interesting (making a new set of wayne twins instead of giving Bruce a sister) but seeing as that doesn't change anything but names it doesn't really matter anyway. If you're still writing in excited to see what comes next, otherwise great work on the story! |
RandomGuy chapter 1 . 10/31/2015 Great story! My only issue is with the rampant usage of ALL-CAPS. |
typhoon chaos chapter 1 . 7/2/2015 Decent plot, good writing, keeping us on the edge... BUT FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS SACRED AND HOLY, DO SOMETHING ABOUT THE CAPITALIZATION! Seriously though, the capitalization of every word left the whole thing being almost impossible to read. |
Vented567 chapter 16 . 1/26/2015 Cool story |
Guest chapter 16 . 1/25/2015 Dude your story's awesome please update I like a good BatMan crossover even if it takes place in an alternate universe. |
Aspiring-Creator chapter 16 . 12/24/2014 Not really a review but I just want to let you know that I got your messages and that I sent my replies, get to them when you have the time. |
silverwolf chapter 16 . 12/14/2014 you should write a story where Dash becomes the Flash oh and also continue Son of Shego |