Reviews for The Incredibles: Dark Knights
foxytigerbabe89 chapter 1 . 3/10/2019
WTFisbatmandoinghere?
DC Watchergirl chapter 16 . 7/11/2018
Well I love this story the way it is. Sorry you had a lot of braty comments. I get them some times on my stories and it's no fun.
Still, this is really cool! And I'm actually glad Batman is an OC. It works better in the story and makes things more interesting and gives you the liberty to make him do things that Bruce wouldn't that really are important in the story. Also Batwoman was AWESOME. And their relationship is PERFECT for what a sibling relationship should be. I should know I'm in one.
:) 3
Obsidian Prime chapter 16 . 6/19/2018
It's disappointing to see people who have their head so far up their asses you could take a gun and show them, tell them, and even shoot their genitals they still would have no idea what you are talking about.

(Stupid people PISS. ME. OFF.)
MultiFandomTrash-6 chapter 16 . 6/19/2018
I loved this Au story. Hope you do more. You did an amazing job at writing this.
Knox chapter 16 . 6/8/2018
If there was a cast list could you write it on DeviantArt
jon12231223 chapter 16 . 4/8/2018
need more
Guest chapter 12 . 11/13/2017
AWWW YEAH! The calvary, has arrived! It’s party time now baby! Time to Hero up.
TercesTardis chapter 1 . 2/5/2017
Nice twist making Batman a teenager. Saw what you did there: "Mr. Bane". The funny thing was the cartoon Batman was playing on the tv as I was reading this.
Doominater84 chapter 1 . 12/4/2015
This is a really fantastic story! If you're still rewriting it my criticism would be to work on the grammar and what I find to be an overuse of CAPS. I think some of you're decisions were interesting (making a new set of wayne twins instead of giving Bruce a sister) but seeing as that doesn't change anything but names it doesn't really matter anyway. If you're still writing in excited to see what comes next, otherwise great work on the story!
RandomGuy chapter 1 . 10/31/2015
Great story!
My only issue is with the rampant usage of ALL-CAPS.
typhoon chaos chapter 1 . 7/2/2015
Decent plot, good writing, keeping us on the edge... BUT FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS SACRED AND HOLY, DO SOMETHING ABOUT THE CAPITALIZATION! Seriously though, the capitalization of every word left the whole thing being almost impossible to read.
Vented567 chapter 16 . 1/26/2015
Cool story
Guest chapter 16 . 1/25/2015
Dude your story's awesome please update I like a good BatMan crossover even if it takes place in an alternate universe.
Aspiring-Creator chapter 16 . 12/24/2014
Not really a review but I just want to let you know that I got your messages and that I sent my replies, get to them when you have the time.
silverwolf chapter 16 . 12/14/2014
you should write a story where Dash becomes the Flash oh and also continue Son of Shego
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