Great story, I liked the idea. Hope you'll write more stories like this !

Nice story...interesting idea:o) Thank you for sharing!

Well Tony has a brother more family. And they seem to be on the right path. Slowly to having a relationship. It might not be totally brotherly but it something.

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I think you're doing a wonderful job with the direction and the tone of ths story! The character voices and lines ring true,(melodrama is a big turn off for me).Loved the Tim/Tony scene.

Nice!

Terrific chapter, what a plot twist!

Glad McGee is ok. And him and Tony talked. i think Tony needed someone else to talk about everything that he has learned.

Cant wait for Tonys talk with his brother.I hope it goes well for Tonys sake. Somehow i dont think it will. At least not right away.

omg i love this. typical dinozzo senior to not be there for either of his sons. idiot. poor tony and victor.

Can't wait for Tony to meet Victor! Thanks for the update!

As if Tony wasn't having a hard enough time before he found out that he had to shoot his nephew. I can only imagine what you have in store for the later chapters. Thanks for the update and I look forward to the next one!

Poor Tony he knows he has an older brother. And killed his nephew.

That alot to take in while you in the hospital.

Wonder what this will do to him.

At least he has Gibbs and the team.

Tony wanted Gibbs b/c of the card. It made him uncomfortable since it wasnt signed.

What!

Tonys dad SR is this guys Victors biological dad. So Tony has a half brother. And Victor wanted to kill Tony b/c he killed his son. (Tonys nephew but he didnt/doesnt know That)

Little does Victor know Tony may of had money to get things but it a wasnt loving household.

OMG suprise twist! So exciting :) keep writing

So Tony had to shoot his nephew? Yikes! That won't go over well with Tony, although, he had no other choice. How sad:o( I can't wait to see where you take this story from here!