Awww, that's it? But it was just starting! I wanted to read more. :(

I hope to see the next installment soon. It sounds interesting so far, and I really liked the summary.

That's all there is so far? My goodness, you need to write more! This is very promising!

It's great! Will you continue? Like make then meet again?

I love your writing, real excited for you to continue this, please!

Nice begining! I love the part about how Peter and Wendy both felt empty. Nice work! Update soon!

I really loved your dedication, although you forgot to put 'me' where you say 'reminds me of Wendy'. I also think you used the word 'time' too much, and you used the phrase 'come across' more than once. Idk, maybe it's just me, I'm sorry. I am after all your biggest critic. ;) xoxox V

Wonderful narration, full with emotion. Anyway, do you intent to write as a flashback in the prologue? That's why you used the italic font? So, I expect you use the regular one next time.

As an extreme Peter/Wendy lover, kindly inform me if it be happy ending or not. If it is, I promise to read and review every single chapter. If not, sorry if I give up reading as I can't stand THEY aparted again.

As for this part,

'So Wendy left Neverland, childhood and Peter Pan behind...'

Do you intend for HER to just grow up or, grow up and marry before HE come back (as in 'Moving on, Growing up', someone's story before you, which was not my liking)? If just growing up, I can accept. I'm sure you'll find the way for THEM to be together. But if SHE married and had 'Jane' just to separate from HER husband and be with HIM, sorry to say 'goodbye'. It's not my liking either.

I acknowledge a writer has every right to write what he/she wants to. However, I'd appreciate if you gave me some information about your story.

Sincerely.