Uh-oh. Minerva sees Harry being civil to Severus - and it's not a prank (unbeknownst to her). She also does not know how much trouble that Molly Weasley is in with Dumbles (yet). Methinks someone will be in need of Scotch in a few minutes.

I would like to finish this story.

I would like finish this story.

Add more

Can you do a few more plz

Bad Writing, bad storyline, I'm sorry, but this nowhere near enraptures what J.k. Rowling was trying to portray. The writing matches an 11 year old. Please fix it because it does have some potential

When a new person speaks you put it in its own paragraph.
Ex (this is totally random):

Sara turned to Ashley with a silly, highly amused expression. "Cupcakes!" She squealed as if she were five. Sara danced around the kitchen counter, occasionally stopping to lean over the fresh baked cupcakes to get a whiff of their delicate, strawberry aurora that lured her towards them.
"For one," Ashley began, in a very matter-of-fact tone that annoyed Sara immediately, "Those are for the wedding. And for two, we are not in the wedding, so you shouldn't get your hopes up that you actually get to try one."
Sara stopped skipping around to glare defiantly at her friend, hands placing themselves upon her hips, and an angry pout forming on her lips. "Well for one," Sara snapped, putting a strain on the word one, "Since my mom is the baker, I get cupcakes any time I want. For two, I don't care about the wedding!"
Their bickering continued for a while, until finally Ashley screamed so hard it made her go hoarse. There they wrote their insults . . .

See, I started dialogue in a new paragraph. I still love, love, LOVE your story though.

It's really good, but it doesn't flow well. Don't forget grammar, either.
Like and ex. from Chapter Three :
Snape who was sitting near them was seething in rage, Flitwhick was animating a visual of the scene, and McGonagall was hiding a smirk.

It should have looked like :
Snape, who was sitting near them, was seething in rage; Flitwhick was animating a visual of the scene, and McGonagall was hiding a smirk.

When you put in a fragment like 'who was sitting near them', you need to put commas. When you've completed a sentence but you feel like adding more, you put a semicolon ( ; )

I still love how you said Snape was 'seething in rage'. I can picture him fumming and it's hilarious!

Why did you not force te Weasleys to seete memory after they accused Harry?

That was certainly a differant end in the chamber.

hee hee Cute.

Superb!

I wish! Most excellent!

Superb! I would think that Arthur spoke from grief and will realize soon what happened. After all they can see the memory.

Wow! What a difference! Very compelling.