Stroud D: noooooooooo

Ah, Ferelden sound very good to me... a lot of story potential can be found there :-) I really love this story, I wish you would update more often... But I am of course happy about everything I get :-) Thanks!

"WHAT IS IT - MAGE?"

Ooh, boy, Alistair, would you like some hot sauce to go with the foot you just stuck in your mouth? Boy's going to be paying for that for ages. Twit.

"Of the bits of the Mage's life he was familiar with it seemed life handed her an empty sack, filled it with lemons, then beat her with it."

*applause* A very pithy and appropriate description of Bethany's life.

So, Alistair is running back to the Warden-Commander. Hmm, wonder if Am- is Amell. And if she knows how much he feels for her. Or if she'll join Bethany in whacking him over the head for that "What is it MAGE" snap. :}

Im really liking this story :) its cute and unexpected

Haha, tall Bosh'Tet indeed. Nice work on this.

Ahhh, finally a new chaptzer. I wish there would me more... :-)

Raleigh is funny and, well, special. And Bethany and Alistair are simply cure together. I really loved the chapter, it was worth waitig for !

I am happy to see that you are continuing this story. Poor Bethany :-( I am looking forward to read more!

Yes! (Whew!) :)

How very Alistair. Good on him. Nice work on this. I look forward to the next chapter. Keep at it.

Hmm, this is a pairing I didn't expect. It's quite a good one. Nice work on this, I'm rather enjoying it. I look forward to the next chapter. Keep at it.

Aww, darn. This isn't how I wanted them to get together. And I really dislike the Fiona theory... Ah well. Heh, it's not all about me, luckily, and Alistair doesn't seem to care for the idea any more than I. ;) Nice characterization on Alistair's shock and distress.

Oooooo.. I wonder what's going to happen next! I LOVE the dynamic between those two 3

Uh oh...poor Bethany. I think I know what comes next.

I'm very curious as to why the mage disapproves of Alistair so highly! Great story-I love the bantery dynamic between these two! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Really like your story so far! I haven't even thought of Brthany x Aliatair... Love it! Please update soon :)

LOL! Just...lol. Nice combination of relationship development, amusing banter, and some gentle fun with the reader. Twitch your nose, bundle of joy, indeed! ;) Lol.