Awesome continue please

I LOVE IT!1

Damn! That was hot..! I think after all this time and no sequel it's a bit out of reach but ..Please write a sequel..Pretty please? Selena just can't say no to Demi, even trying to tell herself she didn't want it :P This is without a doubt one of my favourite oneshot/smut stories! *runs away to read more of your amazing stories*

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Hahaha I loved this story! Yeah they both got what they needed hahaha!

I love the sarcasm. "I think you're already doing that, princess." Great wit, and also funny because of PPP. Technically, Selena wasn't the princess but Demi made her one kinda in the movie. Idk. I'm rambling.

There's a kind of beauty in this kind of writing. It's not just sex for the sake of sex. There's emotion, and it tugs at the heart. Very well done.

I love Dom!Demi... gahh why is she so hot *drool*. Although I do love me some Dom!Selena too, don't get me wrong. Oh who am I kidding, as long as they fuck, I'm good lol. Nyways loved the storyyy you should do a sequel... you my friend are meant for smut, and smut was meant for you. :D

Ahh smutty goodness. Nothing like it lol. Well maybe smutty goodness with vampires. Possibly a cyclops or a succubus lol. I dunno im actin weird tonight :-) any hop what im trying to say is that I enoyjed it lol.

You are a total whore. you were totally drooling writing this. It came out quite nice, I must say :) great job girl.

-foreverpendant

Demi didn't even asked for permission to come over. lol I demand a sequel.

that was hot! i love how Selena was in denial about wanting Demi even tho she totally wanted to jump her bones ;) and everybody loves a dominating Demi! *coughsequelcough*

You... You need to... You need to make a chapter 2. O.O now, if possible. Yes. Right now. Right at this very moment. I want to see what Selena can do. Every one writes Demi dominating and fucking the heck out of Selena, well I want to see what that beautiful girl can do. Please?

Great job :) Definitely very hot, Demi is such a tease, lol. Although I question her ability to restrain herself like that with a naked Selena bent over the couch like that ;) Overall you did an awesome job writing this so it was both different and believable. And the ending was perfect, both how Demi showed how she truly was feeling, and how Selena decided to return the favor :) Keep up the good work.

_ I summed it up already. I can't add more. This is just the official recording.

Your. Awesome. Has. No. Limitation.

I STILL SAY THIS NEEDS A SEQUEL, BB. DEMS HAS NEEDS TOO, BOBBI JO. :D

But anyway. I'm gonna quote some parts here that were my favorite and comment on them. Since I didn't do that while betaing for you.

"Demi's free hand traced her collarbone and throat and she smiled when Selena's breaths grew heavier." - IDK why, but I love this imagery right here. Like. Maybe its my obsession with necks and pulse points and throats and all, but seriously. (pretend there is a heart right here that doesn't allow formatting for)

"Her brain was saying no, her body was screaming yes, but she couldn't figure out what in the world her heart was saying." - again, another part that I really loved. Cause, that's seriously what old-love but really lustful sex is. I don't know if that really explains it. I hope so.

"admiring the sight of Selena Gomez bent over for her." - who wouldn't! :D :D :D

"It was a rhetorical question and Selena only whimpered." - you make Selena such a sub, you ;)

"Even if Demi couldn't see her face, she could read her like an open book." - YES. JUST. YES. Cause its so true. :D

"The plush loveseat was the perfect size for the both of them and Selena crawled on top of Demi, laying her head on Demi's chest and sighing when Demi ran a hand through her hair." - Again, I love your use of imagery here. I can just SEE it. And I love that mental you give right here :)

""I think you look beautiful with sex hair."" - Selena Gomez. With sex hair. Me: :D:D:D:DDD Yesssssss.

"Demi didn't notice Selena's wandering hands until she heard her belt being undone. "It's your turn."" - Do you SEE how you ended it? Do you? Do you now get why I say there should be a sequel? Or at least there is room for one?

But anyway. I have to say what I live most is your imagery. And do what you will. You know I will always love your writings, no matter what. :3

~Zaski