Completely brilliant story. Typed as I wipe tears from my eyes for the young minds and lives that were lost to senseless violence. Your Gap Theorem makes perfect sense to me and does fit the Tony that hides behind the masks that appear at Tony's wish and command.

thank you very much

A poignant tale.

ok, it is totally weird for me to read out of this perspective. but you let it work quite well and I got used to it somehow.
I like the idea of Tony MD and love the connection one can built to his friends. You were right, it isn't a nice end per sé but in a way his team's presence is a good comfort for me '
The flashbacks are a bit confusing because of the different times they went back but they helped to built a wonderful connection to your four Original Characters.
I can understand Tony's reasoning for becoming a doctor, as well as quitting the job and I love how Ducky doesn't let anything slip 3
so all in all it was nice to read you work, thank you for your time, Sona

Great story! 3

I like this. Well done.

I could see that happening to someone and it changing their life completely. Some people could work through it and others it would totally devestate.

A very interesting idea.
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Absolutely worth it. I loved the idea of Tony once being a doc. Of course I would like to know if Gibbs knows and if the others find out eventually. Their faces when they do should be awesome to watch xD
I also liked the explanation why Tony quit the ER and went into law enforcement, I just wonder who the doc is, he meets in the hospital when he's shoot. I thought that at least one of his friends might have survived and is now still working as a doc, but it seems I guessed wrong on that one (not that I mind. It was a lot more traumatic like that xD).
Anyway, thanks for sharing your story.
Ebenbild

Loved it but i think you need to continue even if they are just one shots.

Excellent analysis of Tony's character and motivations. And people die of skin diseases all the time, Kate! You think Tony doesn't know that? He's messing with you!

I've been reading Dr DiNozzo for quite some time, and having gone back to chapter one to re-read (just because I feel like it) I see the A/N that mentions this fic. So I figure I will read it.

Interesting theory and good number crunching. And although I personally dont agree with your theory, I do still like it.

As far as I am concerned what you see of Tony on the surface - irritating, bullying, movie-quoting, jealous, insecure prankster - is exactly what you get. And I cant stand him!

Clever - I like your timeline!

Yes it was worth it.
I saw the summary and thought, no way, this is to much, I love Tony and belive him to be intelegent and have more layers than an onion but this is to unrealistic. And then I read the fic.
You made me belive, you made me love it and you made me want to read more from this verse.
Good work.

Nice.

Definitely an intriguing story.