Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Sucks that this was abandoned. It's really good.

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Itachi looks like Walter and not sure the first one

Duuuude when are you going to add the next chapter, I'm dying here, I really want to read it. You introduce all these great characters, make us care about them then leave us hanging, I know the story focus is mainly on the daughters but I'd live to see more of the relationship between naruto and his wives. One thing I wasn't sure of though, does tsukiko know about what happened to whedabra's eggs? I don't see how she wouldn't but it seemed like she doesn't, also was the onsen in the castle?

update!

Great chapter, I'm desperately hoping that you'll update at some point, this story is just too good to abandon.

Excellent.

Okay, I shall. You're stories are really awesome and I didn't review the last one past "Ooooh! Kyuubi!" because I didn't want to stop reading... then I fell asleep.

Well, an interesting idea, and while there is a rather humorous diary style fic, on the site. I do not think that it would be wise to make to many chapters like this, I also hoped to see something from you over winter break, but oh well.

Ah, I am frankly surprised at the level of Moe an uchiha is capable of showing.

Ah, the fourth wall... It broke.

I love it. I know, that writing believable romance is difficult, and wish you luck. Though, your other Yuri story, of a Kunoichi, and a lazy demoness, is good in that regard.

Hmm, Itachi, reminded me of Walter, good chapter, plead continue.

god! i must say the only thing that i await is the scene where naruto is involved! and where the heck is his first daughter with his dead lover? i never had any prejudiced towards yuri but i never liked them...i am a normal straight young woman so it is normal that i like yaoi more than yuri. anyway liked how you make itachi called him master avaron. oh butler itachi! you are amazing just you managed to handle the dysfunctional avaron family.