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devil556 chapter 5 . 5/28
please update story soon.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/2
Even thor in the comics isn't all that "balanced" you know... He's got the powers of a GOD, Like a REAL GOD... and yet he plays "grab ass" and wrestling matches with the hulk.. shouldn't that be WAAAAAY beneath him? He can RESURRECT THE DEAD, so why does he get with a nurse? Again.. hitting a little BELOW his level don't ya think?

Now naruto has ALL that power.. "god blast", "anti force", "geo blast", and "thermal blast" all abilities he has and ALL of them, each one, can wipe out that PLANET.. LIKE EVERYONE ON IT... INSTANTLY... There isn't a thing they could do to STOP IT... So more or less... They're all ANTS to him.. He is a GOD (born of gaia.. BASICALLY WHAT THEY ARE STANDING ON). This fight with negji should have been a JOKE... and sasuke? Unless he wants ino to do it... Would be an EASY MURDER!
Guest chapter 5 . 1/2
Upcoming things.. easy

1. Ino turns sasuke into a drooling vegetable, for the rest of his life (completely ERASES his mind).. Of course this could also make him a VERY easy target for orochimaru, (there is no soul to fight)

2. Needs to get over sasuke. It's IDIOCY, especially in this story.. So she needs to GROW UP. Getting with naruto MAKES a kinda sense.. but also getting with LEE makes sense (although I REALLY don't wanna see a bunch of pink-haired, BIG EYED idiots running around.. So naruto is better)

3. Never been a fan of toads either... FOXES make a LOT more sense... (a whole lot more if you consider naruto is PART kitsune) dragons also work.. it makes sense, considering his name is MALESTORM...

4. Naruto deserves a harem.. Yeah I know it's been done to death, but he really does, think superman, you don't think he could get a BUNCH of women on EVERY DIFFERENT country?.. Same here, but naruto is BUSTED, he's BROKEN.. It's why so many authors make him an idiot and why canon plays that up.. He's BROKEN he had nobody to learn from, he has NO ROLE models and he was told he was SCAT all his life... If he finds his power and gets with several girls, it's because he's "looking for something" and if he finds it, with all them? THEN GREAT, A STABLE, SANE deity!
Guest chapter 5 . 1/2
You realize there is NO POSSIBLE WAY negji could have just "kicked naruto off him"... Thor, (so Naruto) weighs over 600 lbs! There is NO physical way for that "string-bean" negji to have PUSHED, SHOVED or Kicked naruto OFF of him. Tsunade? Yes she could, Lee? Maybe, Gai? Yes, Negji? Not possible. Negji (and sasuke) are like FLEAS next to thor's level of power! Naruto takes ENTIRELY too many hits in this fight, I mean negji is a GENNIN, Naruto is A GOD! The power level ALONE is almost LAUGHABLY unfair, Naruto SHOULD not have been able to be TOUCHED! And broken negji as easy as a normal person STEPS ON AN ANT!
Umm, Wouldn't what negji JUST said about the "other chakra" be counted as "breaking the law" considering the MANY witnesses (including the HOKAGE and loads of people FROM OTHER VILLAGES) and him BE PUT TO DEATH?! (you just basically KILLED HIM OFF! Death by terminal STUPIDITY and deadly DIARRHEA of THE MOUTH!)
Guest chapter 5 . 12/19/2019
Stan Lee, created him as a REAL GOD (thus naruto is one) a VERY REAL, (pray to him and he hears) type GOD! A foil to all the supers he was making, someone OLDER and FAR more powerful then all of them! Here? same thing, but Naruto IS HIM... He's POTENT AS HELL (or would it be heaven?) but he needs to start DOING something and not for the leaf (he's pretty much OUTGROWN the leaf)... like in "storm of the gods" start TRAINING UP everyone to be a shinobi. (that way they don't NEED shinobi anymore.. It brings their way of life to an END... but it also makes their wars NON-EXISTENT.. HE fulfills the prophecy, becoming DESTROYER and SAVIOR all in one... old toad needs to clean out his ears or quit smoking heroin... DESTROYER (or) SAVIOR wasn't what was said at all.. it was "AND" not "or" meaning they CAN'T STOP THIS.. It's already been told... Meaning it's ALREADY COME ABOUT... There is nothing TOO be done, even to try, means YOU WILL FAIL (it's already happened, otherwise there could not be a prophecy.) CATCH-22... You were only told, in order to PREPARE for it. To try to prevent it? Just makes things MESSY and you still lose.
Guest chapter 5 . 12/19/2019
Thor fits right in with these barbarians, I mean lets face it, he's not the "brightest crayon in the box".. So to speak... he's got A STUPID AMOUNT OF POWER (with mjolnir NEARLY UNLIMITED) and yet the movies dumbed him down to a blonde "hulk" and not many minded. YES he supposed to have strength that would make tsunade BLUSH but that's his LEAST power... As in, it shouldn't really get even NOTICED. He's got MULTIPLE powers that can ANNIHILATE planets, destroy entire STAR-SYSTEMS He can teleport through time, dimensions and even space ALONE without hemidal or the bifrost and can SEE on the other side of the galaxy and hear ANYTHING on the planet.. just to name a FEW powers...

You still have him talking nice to sarutobi... WHY? It's because of that man that everyone knew about the stupid kyuubi, and who it was in. Not only that but it's HIM that's trying to eliminate naruto's clan from their HISTORY... It's him who has made it so nobody knows naruto's MOTHER or father! I fail to see how he's an "ally". At WORST. he's a flat out ENEMY, at BEST he's a COMPLETE INCOMPETENT MORON!
Guest chapter 5 . 12/18/2019
I think instead of making "thor" just a complete PUMP UP (which apparently you don't wanna do because of the whole "training garbage"... You should have naruto feel what thor does, ALL his friends, his "loves" his enemies are ALL GONE not just gone, but utterly FORGOTTEN! His home, the very reason he defended mortals.. ALL GONE... Mixed with naruto who is essentially a boy who had everything TAKEN from him, it doesn't exactly make a "DARK" story per say, but it makes naruto question "WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED TO HUMANITY?" Where is the "light" that thor defended?

Remember in thor's time, they LOCKED UP bad-guys and that was that... Here the kyuubi IS locked up.. And people are against the jailer! That goes against EVERYTHING thor was for! Not to mention taking the name, the clan, the history from him, that should strike a cord with him!

Thor fusing with naruto is A HECK OF A LOT MORE then a "power-up".. You just need to recognize that. Naruto for the most part commands UNLIMITED POWER (he shows that when he beats pein).. THOR also can LEVEL GALAXIES... TEAR PLANETS IN HALF (in fact actually welded one back together)... When both become one?.. Getting on his bad side isn't just suicidal, it's HORRIBLE for all life. the STORY (other then just kicking everyone's asses) is that now naruto has the MIND of adult and one that's a leader of men, he can NOW see what's wrong and how he's treated.
Guest chapter 5 . 12/18/2019
Places? That REALLY confuses me, MOST of marvel happens in the WEST...BEYOND the elemental nations, in the realm of "gellel", knights and swords...MAGIC...ALL the characters would be OUTCLASSED (lets face it, the elemental nations are BASICALLY savages) they don't WANT to alert the west they exist (or they would feel the need to "civilize" them..aka CONQUER) Not only all that, but the WORLD has shifted, those "places" don't exist.
Guest chapter 5 . 12/18/2019
I fail to see how there would be OTHER marvel elements.. AGAIN.. AGES have past, AND THE END OF THE WORLD... It's ALL GONE... EVERYTHING.. Every realm... You can KINDA tell that from the shinobi talking about the past... They don't remember ANY OF IT.. that means the world is LONG DUST.. SO much that they don't know "japan" or "asia" or "guns" heck the WORLD isn't even shaped the way it is now, that takes MILLIONS of years... It's all gone, as in not even BOOKS or history survived (it's happened before)... THOR is an "accident" a "leftover"... That should NOT exist... Nothing marvel SHOULD still be around (well, okay... HULK is ageless and immortal, so maybe him and dr. strange CANNOT die by the passage of time, so he MIGHT still be around, ghost rider is ALSO immortal *as is it's host* so maybe him too). But bad-guys? They all SHOULD be LONG GONE. (usually killed by the heroes that are ALSO long dead)
Guest chapter 5 . 12/18/2019
I like this one, EXCEPT the cask of endless winters.. THAT'S JUST STUPID... If ragnarok happened, ALL of the artifacts from the nine reals should BE POWDER... The destroyer armor, the cask, EVERYTHING (except obviously mijolnir)... The cask has been used to DEATH, it was even a JOKE artifact in "marvel avengers: Frost Fight"... Which was a show about saving SANTA CLAUS...It's PATHETIC to use again. It's SO OVERUSED that even canon AUTHORS of marvel think it's STUPID. Just know ON THIS ONE.. THOR/MIJOLNIR is the LAST SURVIVING thing OF HIS ENTIRE RACE/DIMENSION...That's IT, JUST HIM AND IT.

Everything/one else is a GHOST OF THE PAST and broken debris. This is not ONLY after basically "the end of the world" it's also THOUSANDS of years later... AFTER MANKIND and AFTER superheros and villains... It's ALL DONE and DUST. Even iron man's armor would have CORRODED to NOTHING by now! Everything thor EVER KNEW for MILLENNIA is GONE, Not even REMEMBERED at this point... that INCLUDES that ridicules box! (shouldn't orochi fear that thing more then anything else ANYWAY? First things to die in the cold are snakes! He shouldn't even be able to come NEAR it).
Guest chapter 4 . 12/18/2019
I like this one, but I fail to see why naruto has to "train" and all that garbage... He IS essentially THOR, his body, mind/memories... ETC.. are THOR... There is no POINT and a few sit-ups and push-ups are NOT going to give the power too him.. He IS essentially in the BODY of a GOD...The only similarities they have to humans are APPEARANCE. Everything else about them is COMPLETELY different. So there is NO POINT to "training"... Just know that he's OUT OF MOST PEOPLE'S LEAGUE... He can fight KAGES and Akutski and BIJUU toe-to-toe but gennin and "regular" nins? He's gonna MULCH em. I don't see why this isn't just "ACCEPTED" and blow past it. Weird stuff like him getting a HUGE pump up is KINDA NORMAL for them in their world. Especially for a "jinchuriki". "it's like the running joke on south park: You killed kenny"... Here it would be "oh look naruto just attained Godhood, I think george did last year!"
Guest chapter 4 . 12/17/2019
Serikously, your gonna end "happy" lives (sorta) that have no idea you even EXIST to play "happy face in a mirror".. which could have been done with a mirror. Anime makes to many mountains out of hole-hills.. THIS IS JUST STUPID.

Negji become HELLBENT on a destroyer of the main clan... Because he didn't get a LETTER from his daddy *that he couldn't possibly remember*

The uchiha clan were WIPED out in some theatric horrific way, and NOBODY NOTICED in the whole village? You'd think someone would have heard a dying SCREAM or two. Especially the babies.

Nobody heard anything, or called for help, and sasGAY buys that huh?
Guest chapter 4 . 12/17/2019
I never understood this whole "moon eyed plan" anyway, you DO realize the moon is only seen ONCE a month, so how does that keep everyone?... Otherwise the shadow keeps it out.. I mean maybe get everyone once a month for three days... BUT... It really doesn't make much sense. and if the whole point is obiedto or nageto going back to a simpler time a stopping all this? Why don't they just use a mirror for obedio (isn't it pretty much the same thing?) or obedito "zapping" nageto?
Guest chapter 4 . 12/17/2019
Considering thor is supposed to be able to "see things that happen on the other side of the solar system"... YES HIS SENSES ARE THAT POWERFUL, seeing faces from the top of the hokage monument should be KINDA easy. He makes the doujutsu of the world look like "poor, ugly step-sisters". The movies DUMB his power level down so FAR as too not even be funny (AND HE'S STILL ONE OF THE "BIG GUNS") oh and senses aren't going to be "learned" like MOST of thor's powers, naruto should just HAVE them now (there is no "learning" most of them). He went from "class clown" to "SHOULD be able to rip orochimaru and their PLANET to shreds with ease!"... IN *SNAP*, you gotta think, THOR'S training took 500 years, they have 3 before their world ENDS! As much as it feels like "cheating" on a lot of stories, they just don't have TIME for a lengthy, "get to know the power" type story. They need to get with the idea of, "the persecuted, abused IDIOT just became the MOST POWERFUL BEING on the planet, OVERNIGHT!". The characters ALL need to "go from there". (it's not like it CAN'T happen in the naru-verse... The star fragment, the stone of gellel, the hero water, the chakra gates, all give IMMENSE POWER, INSTANTLY.
Guest chapter 4 . 12/17/2019
"thank goodness orochimaru still doesn't know how to make a decent seal". I see your going with canon (orochimaru always has sucked at sealing). But it confuses me, if orochi is so TERRIBLE at sealing, why is the curse seal such a bother then? I mean, it's ALWAYS a pest in these ff stories, yet the guy that made it is INEPT at seals... So it's KINDA contradictory that it should be ANY kind of a problem at all. (pretty much a glaring PLOT HOLE in canon).

I still say that in ANY of these stories where naruto gets "new" powers (vamp, thor, superman, kratos, demon, angel, mutant, prototype, etc), negji should be EMBARRASSINGLY easy to beat (I mean, like little more effort then wip0ing his nose to FLAT OUT KILL the little inflated P.O.S. ) It should be BLATANTLY obvious that Naruto is NO GENNIN by ANY stretch of the imagination. Not even on the same "metaphysical CONTINENT". The kinda beat down, where naruto doesn't get a SCRATCH, or negji can't even pull off a SINGLE MOVE. or the match is done before people can LITERALLY BLINK! "goldfish (negji) vs. GREAT WHITE SHARK (naruto)". that is more along the REAL power levels we are talking. Thor vs. negji (as in this one), negji wouldn't even be able to WHINE before he was taken out! his "finger pokes" probably wouldn't even be able to get through thor's ARMOR let alone his skin, and one HIT would turn him into "red creamed corn". and that's BEFORE powers OR mjolnir. Negji is OUTCLASSED in every POSSIBLE way.
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