You need to back, is good stuff and to long the wait.. please come back with chapter 5

love this story, and would like to see more of this. Are you going to update anytime soon?
But i would like to see a little more development between Naruto and Sakura, i feel it was a little fast but can still improve :)

And i would like to see Sakura's Zan-pak-to, its hard to choose out of those three because of all the many different ways that they could go.

Love to see an update soon :)

I'm a little turned off with how Sakura automatically fell in love with the person she found annoying just an hour prior. The best NaruSaku fics are about the development of her feelings towards Naruto; you skipped that crucial piece altogether. Your first chapter otherwise is not all that bad. You definitely have a lot of potential with this but I still think you should smooth out the edges by having a little development for Sakura's feelings.

amazing chapter love it

i wish sakura had win vs Ino but hehe tie is a tie

yay narusaku im waiting for taht to come hehe

sakura need had te other to make team seven teh xzampatou team XD

i think gaara but he already dont had it? what i read he had the one in him mind already that why he dint kill everyone like the serie

Hm I thought I review oh well I am beting on gara being next

Just started reading your story so far so good :D
Wondering if I missed this in one of your AN, does Naruto still have the fox in his stomach since he did die?
So Sakura didn't get a sword because she doesn't have a "good heart" lol poor Sakura, always going to be the weak link/damsel in distress. (of course I've only read your first 3 chpts so far).

I notice a type-o in this chpter:

"Lee slowly opened his eyes and saw that Sakura and Ino were in danger but knew he didn't have the strength in him to stop the tree."
(It should of been Ten-Ten, not Ino.)

Yes it does my vote is Gaara.

Jishaku? UUUUUUHHHHHHH A ZANPAKUTOU. OR HOWEVER IT SPELLED. Aw, Can Kiba ends up with Hinata? WAIT WAIT I TAKE THAT BACK. Aaaaaanyway what was I about to say earlier,... Right. Lee is a bit OOC somehow. I liked how you made some of the others have Zanpakutou aswell. Especially Sasuke. So he won't go run off recklessly to kill his bro and join the snake-homo (I love calling Orochimaru that). But, out of many things I don't like (Woah, woah, please, don't take it that way), it's the Author Notes. It's too long. Ah, well, awesome fic, tho. When is NaruSaku kickin' in? :D

I WILL BE WAITING FOR THA' NEXT CHAPTER. BELIEVE IT!

Well, just seeing the epicness in this chapter, I was actually thinking this will got OVER 100 REVIEWS! But I'm disappointed. This is such a good story (really hoping it'll be NaruSaku)! That means a follow.

Well then what about his mother being the second container or his other relative(I believe she is another relative) Mito being the first container? I'm not trying to poke holes in your story. Also what about Jiraiya he is his godfather feel about it? That also seems to be a big secret too. By the awesome I got mention in the reviews. Why did Zabuza get his head buried?

Interesting, enjoyable read but Tazuna's daughter is Tsunami, Tsume is Kiba's mother.

Lol!

Your title sounds like a mixture of shadow and mum!

Can Sakura be a bit like yoruichi?

dude the daughter is not tsume its tsunami. tsume is kibas mom.

Enjoying it so far. One slight problem though you mention a S rank secret would prevent the adoption, but isn't his parents identity a S rank secret?