Starting... Haku was a male... and even if you got the OC from another author, the name Dastan and a time manipulating sword is remarkably reminiscent of Prince of Persia.

holy carp what a cliffhanger! In my imagination Toshiro kicks all the ass and then hooks up with and marries Hermione and Padma... and later Luna because .. reasons...

I'll be blunt. He needs to tie Fumblebutt spreadeagled and face up outside to either a wall or the ground while ensuring he is able to see EXACTLY what occurs during the upcoming attack. If he survives, he might (just maybe) learn not to cross the Soul Society and that he can be (and often IS) wrong. If he dies, good riddance and turn his grave into a public urinal in a pet park. If ANY of the students or even their familiars die or get injured, execution and being dragged by his hair (on either end) before the Emperor to explain his actions before being cast into Heuco Mundo bound and with a free meal sign stapled irremovably to his soul.

how df does albus know the head captain? really? he just happens to know him even tho soul society is supposed to be strictly non living affiliated

Well, hope you're alive out there, and that you'll eventually come back to continue and finish this, along with your other stories

Actually, you have that when Dumbledore leaves, Tōshirō remembers that he can't open a Senkaimon on his own (why not?), then heads to Madam Malkins, then to the trunk shop, then to Ollivander's, then gets his owl, and only *then* does he go back to Flourish & Blotts.

Thanks for calling me a moron, peasant -.- , you should probably think before you type cos there are multiple reasons behind someone not knowing something like, i dont know, learning dissabilitys or poverty, aside from that, i like the book.

Bit too many OCs for me

Dear Leonineus,

I'm sorry.

I didn't want to start this review off on a bad note, but I can't help but feel deeply disappointed. Your fic is brilliant, it really is, and I love it, really I do! But it's 2017 now. I've been waiting years for an update, and I'm sure others have too. If you're suffering from a bad case of writer's block, I have a few ideas that have been bugging me for a while but I can't get the courage to write down.

For example, what if something bad happens? Maybe the Weasley twins play a school-wide prank and let loose some Slytherin-colored firecrackers in the Great hall. Maybe this pushes a collection of unwanted memories onto Toshiro of his parents' deaths via AK curse. Maybe he gets overwhelmed by these memories and loses control on his ice powers. What then?

Please, please, PLEASE continue this fic. It's so brilliant, I keep coming back to it, even after all these years!

Yours truly,

The Apprentice.

Nice! Please writte some more soon.

according to gawp's law, you cannot duplicate food nor transfigure it. Apparently, some alcoholic drinks are exempt from his law. go figure.

Please update soon

More chapters please?

Its either dushbag grobben or dumbledork the grey whos doing it and it is a real shame this fic is dead id have loved to see it continued

Dumbledore is a d***, nobody will change my mind on that!