Reviews for Citadel
Lightning317 chapter 24 . 7/16
There are several things that make this fiction one of my favorites. Here are the top three: one, I love how sweet Katara is to Azula from start to finish and despite Azula’s memories not being there, I believe you captured each character’s personalities well. Two, I love how Azula regained her Identity/ remembered who she is. Three, I absolutely love the Azula’s character growth. If you ever decide to write more Azula & Katara or Azula x Katara, I’ll be the first to read it. Thanks for the awesome read and I’m on to your next fictional writing!
Lightning317 chapter 16 . 7/15
That was so adorable! Haha this chapter is one of my favorites. You said people don’t like reading about Azula’s softer side, I sure do! Thanks for the awesome chapter and I can’t wait to read more
Lightning317 chapter 9 . 7/15
I usually don’t flock to fictional stories with Asula appearing as crazy but I always give them a chance and I’m usually disappointed. However it’s not the case with yours. I can’t place my finger on it but your story captivated me especially cause your writing skills are levels above others. I’m given visuals and you provide a ground on which people get an inside look and can relate a bit to her. Thanks for the cool story. When I’m able to place my finger on it on what attracts me to this piece of writing I’ll let you know ASAP.
Alliyah Baluyot chapter 24 . 12/19/2019
I clapped. I legitimately /clapped/. That was a beautiful ending and you damn well know I'm already flicking over to the sequel. Thank you for all your time and effort writing this story, it was stunning.
Alliyah Baluyot chapter 16 . 12/19/2019
oh my GOD azula talking about love and how much she doesn't deserve it ugh how dare you play with my feelings like this
Alliyah Baluyot chapter 10 . 12/19/2019
oh the shipping days are real
Alliyah Baluyot chapter 9 . 12/19/2019
ok but how the hell did this chapter made my heart warm and break at the same time? this was stunning
torvalds42 chapter 24 . 8/14/2019
Awesome story, thanks a lot!
torvalds42 chapter 14 . 8/14/2019
Awesome chapter, I loved the end of it! This scene under the storm, perfect.
torvalds42 chapter 11 . 8/14/2019
A good wash, that you could feel was life changing for Azula. Thanks a lot :)
torvalds42 chapter 9 . 8/14/2019
Great chapter, with the symbolism of getting up. Can't wait to read the rest, so here I go.
witchy-o chapter 24 . 7/1/2019
This story was brilliant. Can't wait to read the sequel!
CoolBeansSir chapter 24 . 6/30/2018
Perhaps you'll never read this review, perhaps you will. No matter what, I just wanted to say that your writing style is truly fascinating, and I love how you wrote the process of Azula's recovery. I have read other fanfics where the authors write her mentally ill then fully recovered within a few days, and that's not how it works. The seriousness (is that a word?) you wrote and the way you depicted her was just so beautifully done that I couldn't help but read the entire story in one day. It doesn't help how you have such a poetic way of writing. I know you desire reviews and comments, but please do not be discouraged if none appear. It doesn't mean there's a lack of interest, but rather it's difficult to say anything smart-sounding to an author who is so eloquent and brilliant. I am also somebody who usually doesn't comment until the entire story is finished since I want to capture the full scale of how much I appreciate the story. This has truly been an adventure, and i can't wait to read the sequel. Thank you for your story and for sharing it with us, your readers. :)
Guest chapter 24 . 6/12/2018
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Alright vague random screaming check. I must confess I have read both this and Satellite and i forgot to review oops. Alas I have reread it realized i didn't review and will now fix this. First off I love it. I love the way you describe everything and how you had Azula deal with her issues. I like how Azula saw herself as a ghost girl in armor and thought she was of the dirt. How she dreamed that she was a dragon when she was taken in after the comet. It's such good imagery.
RynnaWynne chapter 24 . 6/29/2017
This was great, thanks for writing and sharing.
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