Cute story thank you for writing it.

I LOVE IT

I love the chapters.. But you don't have to make Bella THAT bad goodness gracious you don't just have Harry not cook something for her.. I'm sorry if I seem to be overreacting but my family cooks and they cook a variety for everyone. Good read tho.

What was Bella's life like?

loved this one. super hilarious in the middle, and super somber at the end. was nice

"excuse my son, he's acting melodramatic" haha awesome

When I read the part that said, no mpreg. I vocalized it with, you bastard. Like in a hissing way, then what I said made me laugh.

Lily sort of reminds me of cersi(from game of thrones) when you relate their attitudes, only if lily was caring of Harry they would be very similar, since despite all of cersis flaws the one thing she holds above all else is her love for her children(um... the oldest two are dead

I think it works out. Thanks for writing.

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Adored this story. Really love your portrayal of all the characters! Thanks for sharing :-)

wow this is so cool :D
love love love
never liked bella... she's such a drama queen (ugh)
anyway update soon

I love love it

Great story. The nicknames were perfect. This story was light, enjoyable, and humorous. I happily reread this.

Paul and teddy would be an awsome couple