A very cute, sweet, romantic story. I’ve read this twice now. I dislike the really angsty but but it has a happy ending so it’s all good.

I just wanted to say that I come back to re-read this story at least once a year if not more. And It's probably one of my favorite fanfics ever and reading it again always feels like coming home and I'm just so glad that this fic exists and I'm so grateful that you wrote it (ʃƪ)

Dear author,

thank you so much for writing and publishing! I loved it!
Artemis and Wally are just adorable, you captured them perfectly! I love their nagging and the sunflowers and the yogurt.
You wrote that some people got confused about the Artemis-as-the-enemy chapter, but I think you wrote that well and I did understand what was going on. Only that she was dressing up as Tigris, that was a bit weird for me, cause I think the team made that identity up specifically for the deep cover mission in season 2, I think it would be a bit too much coincidence to have Sportsmaster force her into the same costume here.
The dancing scene was brilliant, and I also think you depicted the team's reactions to Wally's absence really nicely, so many emotions in small signs and routines... Very well written!
I think it was a bit harsh of you to not give them a general time frame on how long Wally would be gone - the reader knew, but the team didn't, right? I don't think anyone would have left Fate take Wally indefinitely, it would certainly not have been only Red Arrow going after him if they had not at least gotten some kind of confirmation that finding a new host would take "only" some months instead of potentially years.
I would be interested in knowing how Wally/Fate went about finding a host at all, and who it is...
Good for Zatanna, at least she gets to keep her dad this time!
All in all, I really enjoyed reading your story, and I hope you keep up writing! :D
Best wishes
Simone

Please do one more at least... cliffhangers are the worst..

Absolutely beautiful. This story had it all: humor, romance, and angst. This is one of the best pieces I have ever read. Thank you for making it.

I absolutely love your Spitfire fics, and I think this was one of the first ones I read. It's still a favorite and your stories bring me much joy. Thanks for sharing :)

Well done!

Wow that was an amazing ride! I really hope you consider making a few chapters on how they planned and made it work to help save Artimes's mother. Also more stories would be really cool. So basically start this going again and do not stop.

DA FUCK! U CANT STOP HERE! I wanna see what happens! What were they thinking! Is Batman going to kill them?
Why was he even looking at marriage certificates anyway? Where are Wally and Artemis now? DO THE PARENTS KNOW!

good end.

Your stupid, crazy good, hella heartwarming story had me crying on a public bus for about 40 minutes as I rode home. And I missed my stop. I hope you're happy with yourself, you really really good writer.

I wish here was another chapter describing the days following that bombshell ending, just something simple and foolish(and robin getting the tar beaten out of him)

You did it, you made me cry, like a lot. But I loved this story so much!

This was a great story. I love how you made their realtionship move forward and the part with fate I've never seen before so it was a great change and it's amazing you thought of such a great story twist!

I'm really glad I took the time to read this and you are one hells of a great writer! :D

Super cute! I love this!