Wow was that hot. The suspense, the build, without anything real happening, just the suggestion, so subtle, the desire and longing are so papible, seems like the two of them will burst into flames.

This was very well written! You captured the intensity of the relationship without compromising the struggle. Absolutely loved it. Can I request part 2?

Okay.
So I guess you're just amazing at this. Two for two, my friend, and I'm looking forward to more

You are an amazing author. I just read you're other story, Losing to Win, and I have to say, you're stories are beautiful. They are sort of poetic and emotional and I feel like I could read them forever. I love the longing and that it's from Peter's point of view.

Wow... I totally love it! :)

So mouthwatering thoughts about our favourite CI .

i love this immensly! ah!

Lovely story. Thank you.

oh that was so teasing! just like neal's! oh this two... *.* i really don't know how peter handle it, just look those eyes! ksksks

i'm drooling here now. wow this was intense and got my breth in the right times... oh neal... sksk *-*