Reviews for Unpredicted
ThePeacefulTitaness chapter 4 . 6/29
Why would they make him a god when he is more powerful then them? Also how would Artemis know that she liked him she's never been in love. Good story though.
Guest chapter 14 . 7/26/2019
And the fact you turned it into a stupid vote issue... I’m out. I can already tell the stupidity is going to ramp up to extreme levels and I wanted less drama and more romance not the other way around.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2018
Wow! Now here's a story that doesnt start with Annabeth breaking Percy's heart. That is so bad and overused it makes me click off the story immediately.
jcjunior chapter 3 . 8/7/2018
percy's domain is so lame
Guest chapter 8 . 7/23/2018
cring chapter but gud
Guest chapter 7 . 7/23/2018
1 word 4 last para fuck
Guest chapter 4 . 7/23/2018
FUCK ORION:{
megacharizat chapter 4 . 7/18/2018
how on earth would orion would protect Percy?
megacharizat chapter 3 . 7/18/2018
Oh…kay. what the hell dude? first of all, Percy and Artemis were never that close. secondly, Artemis is someone who turns men in to animals, so why in blazes would she except Percy's offer of being his training partner, tell him to talk about his break up if he wants to, and let him hug her? I mean come on! I understand the stories where Artemis slowly develops feelings for Percy, hell, Pertemis is my favorite shipping. but dude, really, try to be a little more realistic.
Guest chapter 8 . 5/13/2018
Isn't Annabeth suppose to be like with Percy as his best friend.
limecheesecake18 chapter 28 . 4/9/2018
Great story dude, really like it, different from other Pertemis stories! Unique!
Perseus Titanslayer chapter 12 . 12/28/2017
i don't know what to cheer on percy and artemis or percy and Annabeth
Perseus Titanslayer chapter 2 . 12/28/2017
i like it
TridentBolt chapter 5 . 6/22/2017
very
good i liked the plot
TridentBolt chapter 4 . 6/22/2017
i will give this chapter good but you got to slow down
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