I'm glad I am not the only one who thought the speech was actually belonging to the doctor.

I really loved this! Hope there's a sequel.

Congratulations! This is the first Who-fic I've read, and I must say that I quite liked it. I am glad that you kept the heartbreak and the love and friendship with Rory in there as well as the Amy/Doctor angle. You have a great grasp on the characters. I'm looking forward to reading more. :)

This was brilliant! Keep writing on!

This is very sweet and short, my favourite line had to be 'Lets build a world together.' I can cope with Amy/Rory in the show, but I'll always be a Doctor/Amy shipper at heart. Great job!

This was an awsome story. keep writing about Amy and the Doctor

Hahaha! Bananas are cool :)

Awe the doctor. Has a girlfriend

Loved this!

LM x

hahaha bro code it a good thing he hot

Personally, I think you treated the Nose just fine. Heck, you even gave him a TARDIS cell phone. IMHO there was no need for further discussion of him in this chapter, I would rather have had more Doctor/Amy. I am glad you got back to them, and I will definitely give your next story a go. Putting you on alerts.

Lol! Loving the doctor being a big kid! 3 Kinda makes ME wanna go build a city out of blocks too! XD

Very cute chapter. Can't wait for another one. Hopefully with mountains of fluff and childish doctorness? :) x

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*coughs* I love it! That ahhh was my joy of reading this story. Yay!

I wish everything in Day Of The Moon had turned out like this, from the Doctor not flirting with River while rescuing Amy to the 'Bananas are cool!'

Can't wait for the next chapter!

i love cliffhangers! though i don't really like Amy/Doctor pairings you write it well!

I loved reading this. It definitely captivated me and was so intriguing and interesting and quite intense. but it was just too depressing. I couldn't wrap my head round the fact Rory waited 2,000 years for her, just for her to tell him she loves the Doctor more, and for them to just say "Well, we'll kinda miss you I suppose but you can go" and for them to just be making out afterwards guilt free like they never cared about Rory, and the incredible sacrifices he made for his wife! :L it's seems so wrong, and if that happened in the show it would just be incredibly awkward and the viewers would all be having mental breakdowns lmfao. Definitely brilliant, and more realistic, but I prefer the happier, official version. Also, she was defo referring to Rory in the original one. She does call him 'stupid face', and Rory does think it ought to be the Doctor since Amy is so obsessed with him.