The story still (mainly) follows B&B, but good to know a couple changes here and there, especially with good ol' Snow-punching.. It's pretty cute (the other characters), though I can't imagine Stiria and Nix as furnitures.. (snickers) I still can't guess the clock.. Bart? Sazh? Too many possibilities...

And here I thought you were going to name the lobo "Odin"... (snickers)

Oh please update! Beauty and the Beast has always been a favorite of mine and you crossed it with Flight?! Genius! Please do continue _

Oi oi, this is a great fic and only getting better with each update; but where's the update eh? It's sad that I really started to get into this and notice the last update was 5 months ago; I do hope you did not drop this fic. I simply love how you spun the beauty and the beast story into the Final fantasy universe I look forward to a possible next update :)

This story is awesome. I did kind of missed that flan dumping scene you wrote the first time. You write so well that I didn't even notice that it was unbetaed. Keep the good work and thanks for sharing.

eh...I'll give it a chance... but I swear, at the first sniff of cheeseyness, I'm outta here. Nicely paraphrased from the Disney version, and strangely co-incides with Fang and the whole ffxiii theme.

yeah, you did a great job

this is interesting XD

looking forward for next chapters!:D

This is brilliant. Great work I hope you write up more chapters soon. Great work and thanks for sharing.

this has begun to get interesting...

Hmmm interesting...I hope you update this soon.

Another awesome chapter! I was laughing at Ms. Estheim and Vanille giving tips to Fang on how to woo Light. That was awesome. And of course, you've written Yaag very well to be the bad guy. I love it!

My heart went out to Fang at the end. Poor Fang! \ Hang in there! *hugs*

Keep up the great writing!

Yaag and Jihl aside, I'm starting to worry that Fang and Lightning's part is just a simple retelling of the original movie word for word with name changes.

If I recall the next part is when Belle goes looking for food. Maybe if you had Lightning get herself into a different sort of trouble next chapter it can bring Lightning back to her stubborn soldier self rather than, whatever Belle is.

I can't help but notice that Lightning has sustained two injuries that could be life threatening in their own ways and yet hasn't even made an attemt at seeing to them. By all rights she should have bleed out by now from that spike to the gut seeing as she only put pressure on it for what, 2 seconds after removing it? That is not near enough to stop the bleeding from such a wound. Plus both it and the claw wound to the shoulder need to be cleaned and bandaged if she doesn't want to die from infection as I doubt either the spike or Fangs claws where the cleanest to begin with.

Perhaps you might consider moving away from the B&B storyline for the next chapter and have Light leave her room looking for first aid materials rather than food or to explore. As she's got a bit more pride than Belle it's plausible she wouldn't leave for something as minor as hunger on the first night.

Other than that this story is an interesting concept and I'm interested in seeing where you take it.

wow Light is so stubborn ;O which is expected because of the situation she's in.

But I hope Fang finds a way to win her heart! :)

Great chapter!

Looking forward to the next chapter ;D

I am really enjoying this story. It is very different from all other fanfics and I'm surprised not many have stepped into the fairy tale world with the cast of FF13.

Hahaha, Ragnarok Fang was awesome! I was kinda hoping that we would have to fight with her like that (like how Terra has Esper form in FF6), or fight against her, and was sorely disappointed when the game ended and we couldn't. D:

Yay! Yaag gets some love~ Even if it's only to torture him.

Where is Light's blade anyway? I thought she got one in an earlier chapter.

Aaaaand I spent a half hour ride home debating on who would play who in Fang's castle so I'm upper excited for the next chapter!

Ciao! ~Jumi