Reviews for Sugar |
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unknown chapter 1 . 6/30/2019 u re a bad writer mahn work on your imagnations |
Grace chapter 1 . 5/21/2016 *facepalm* It's Raf not 'Raph' |
Mr.deathright chapter 1 . 8/18/2014 More please. |
beth chapter 1 . 7/12/2013 This is a pretty good story. I have to admit I jumped a bit when Miko said Arcee was behind Jack! |
oaktavor chapter 1 . 6/27/2013 Not bad at all |
Shadow Wolfboy chapter 1 . 4/16/2013 I LOVE this fanfic! I love the JackXArcee paring and this fic was just awesome. :) I have request. May I (more or less) rewrite this fic? It'd basically be the same, but with my own style of writing and whatnot to it. Please PM back soon, I was going to go ahead and write it, but I'm too nice to just do it without asking. So I'm asking first. lmao. So anyways, hope to hear from you soon. Later |
Riyappe Paws chapter 1 . 1/13/2013 AH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! OMG! |
Niphelie-um chapter 1 . 12/22/2012 it's ok still good though |
netthaniel6 chapter 1 . 10/7/2012 can u make another chapter to this or a continuation? |
Exigence chapter 1 . 10/5/2012 Hehehe. Oil change...LOL |
Yogurth chapter 1 . 2/27/2012 Actually I did really like it! and it's kind of sweet in the end! _ |
RatchetXHide chapter 1 . 2/19/2012 You need to write more now! |
The defenastrator chapter 1 . 1/1/2012 I find this disturbing, wrong and oddly right all at the same time. |
jesdavi chapter 1 . 12/16/2011 i very much liked this story i hope to see more of jack and arcee or maybe a continuation on this |
Grim T Reaper chapter 1 . 10/14/2011 This is a very good story, and captures the characters rather well. I actually like the idea of Jack/Arcee pairing (even though i know it'll never happen in the show), perhaps you could turn this into a twoshot? or do a sequel or rewrite, and add some more 'interesting' scenes to the mix? (perhaps a lemon or two :P) |