Reviews for Sugar
unknown chapter 1 . 6/30/2019
u re a bad writer mahn work on your imagnations
Grace chapter 1 . 5/21/2016
*facepalm* It's Raf not 'Raph'
Mr.deathright chapter 1 . 8/18/2014
More please.
beth chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
This is a pretty good story. I have to admit I jumped a bit when Miko said Arcee was behind Jack!
oaktavor chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
Not bad at all
Shadow Wolfboy chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
I LOVE this fanfic! I love the JackXArcee paring and this fic was just awesome. :)

I have request. May I (more or less) rewrite this fic? It'd basically be the same, but with my own style of writing and whatnot to it. Please PM back soon, I was going to go ahead and write it, but I'm too nice to just do it without asking. So I'm asking first. lmao. So anyways, hope to hear from you soon. Later
Riyappe Paws chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
AH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! OMG!
Niphelie-um chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
it's ok still good though
netthaniel6 chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
can u make another chapter to this or a continuation?
Exigence chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
Hehehe.
Oil change...LOL
Yogurth chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
Actually I did really like it! and it's kind of sweet in the end! _
RatchetXHide chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
You need to write more now!
The defenastrator chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
I find this disturbing, wrong and oddly right all at the same time.
jesdavi chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
i very much liked this story i hope to see more of jack and arcee or maybe a continuation on this
Grim T Reaper chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
This is a very good story, and captures the characters rather well.

I actually like the idea of Jack/Arcee pairing (even though i know it'll never happen in the show), perhaps you could turn this into a twoshot? or do a sequel or rewrite, and add some more 'interesting' scenes to the mix? (perhaps a lemon or two :P)
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