I LOVE THIS FIC. SO MUCH! I started reading it in Deviantart way back when, and just recently started re-reading it. It is by far the BEST Pokemon Black/White fic I've ever read! Your N and Touko are PERFECT! And I even feel for the bad guys?!

I can't gush over this fic enough. You are a WONDERFUL writer! And I'll eagerly await the next chapter. Because it will so be worth the wait! (Also - is it ok if I draw some fanart of this fic? If I have time, haha!)

Anyway, stay amazing!

I guess this is the beginning of a new adventure.

Haha oww that was almost caught on the spot xD

Hehe oww is he going to learn how to swim? Hmm wonder how little experiencs he haave in this story.

Aww what a sweet start on a story 3

And caught up. I'm glad this fic is back, waiting to see what's going to happen. One thing: it took me a while to understand that some of those scenes were flashbacks, it'd be good if you showed that it's different, like using italics to show it's a different scene from the progression. Otherwise, it's good, I'm glad in chapter 24, finally Atreyu called on Blayre on his temper. Keep going!

"Thank you for choosing 649 Bakery. We bake them all!" *chuckles softly* (granted this is to be expected, hehe).

Boy do I love this fic. It's probably my favourite one form my favourite Pokémon ship. Thank you for this wonderful story.

It's very rare that I find a fic that makes me want to read 20 chapters in the span of two days, haha. Really enjoying this story! You've done a really good job with the OCs, makes me want to learn more about them as the plot continues (I feel bad for Atreyu, the poor soul). Keep up the good work ! c:

FLAWLESS
I really enjoyed reading this! I can't wait to see how everything pans out. Thanks for updating!

What I would do to experience an innocent yet passionate and chaste love. Beautiful work, I sure hope you can finish the story.

Yeah, Noah, Blayre and Atreyu need therapy, URGENTLY. It's like it's Kill la Kill all over again (somehow now I think that Blumenkranz is a fitting theme for Noah).

But I'm really enjoying this story, I really love how you developed White and N, into two mature persons. At first, it seemed it was going to be comedy, with the most effective cockblock system ever designed in a fanfic, but then it turned to suspense, mystery, I even forgot all the teasing. You create very complex OCs that can develop (though I find almost insulting that some readers think that Blayre has any chance with Touko) and I hope to see this fic ressurected one day. Keep going!

Touko commited the same mistake as Ash in Nimbasa.

Blayre needs therapy.

Viola. I see what you did.