Not sure if this is finished, doesn't feel like it, anyhow loved the story, they always keep me interested, not sure exactly which dimension this is but hope to read more

Good to see everyone safe and well and more or less back to normal (which would be constant whinging as far as Alan’s concerned!). Nice that Virgil finally gets some glory – the poor thing was definitely overshadowed by his brothers at the start.

Wise words from John at the end...

Sorry to see this one drawing to a close, you’ve done a fantastic job as always.

Bee

Geez, Alan, can you whine a bit more? Listen to what your brothers are tellin you.

Leave it to John to be the one to just stand there and analyze something. lol At least Gordon had the sense to check, grab, then run out of the fumes with Alan.

Excellent update all the way around, MG! And whilst this past year has been a bit weird for you, you've stood tall with grace and dignity. May 2012 be a much much better year for you and your family...birth and fanfiction.

You DID kill him! Happy dance! Dirky-boy was one of your more annoyingly smug and dangerous villians, and I'm glad to see him gone. Good to know that John and Gordon were able save the company's bacon, too!

Yes, Alan, we know you coulda won. There are other days and other races and you're not washed up yet. Scott has a point; you, like your older brothers before you, have to prove yourself ten-fold if you ever hope to escape the very long shadow of your father.

Now for the wrap up and on to the next adventure! Happy New Year MG! May 2012 be the start of something great!

Yeah, I can understand how it might feel weird to be about to finish this story when your life was so different when you started the story.

In any case though, great chapter once again!

Loved your description of the 'conference': "Just a gathering of the three oldest sons that eventually collected Gordon and Alan like bits of lint on a clothes brush."

So glad they've got that whole experience behind them! Great talk between brothers.

Have a great New Year's Eve!

why won't alan listen? What's going on. Did that guy in the skybox die at last?

Whew! He seems to have made it but you do have me a bit worried since he's not moved. One person I shouldn't have to worry about causing the Tracys anymore harm seems to have gotten just what he deserved.

Looking forward to your next update and the reactions of John and Gordon.

Poetic justice there for Dirk? Hope so. Doesn’t look too good for Alan, though. Wonderfully dramatic writing as always. (I’m always pleased when you’re on holiday and have more time to write!) Bee

DID YOU KILL HIM?

I sooo hope so!

There are still going to be a lot of casualties and questions and pointing fingers. But if Dirky-boy is out of the way ... whew! Here's hoping his true identity gets teased out of his corpse, and the Tracys get a respite from ... well, from everything bad.

Looking forward eagerly for the next installment!

Great chapter! Sure hope Alan is ok!

Haha, you got what u deserve Dirk Pryce.

But i hope thats not te end of the suffering fir the Tracey family(insert evil laught).

Please update soon

Xx idreamfan

Yay! Alan makes it out! Good thing he actually *listened* to John. I'm sure his red race car is in a thousand flaming fragments, and I doubt he got away unscathed. But Dirky boy loses again. And that's what makes it so satisfying.

Looking forward to the next installment.

Good heavens. Poor Alan. Good thing he had John to keep his head on strate.

Another wonderful chapter. Lots of excitement in this one. I can just picture Dirk/Drake watching and eagerly waiting for Alan’s demise. Trust John to hack into the communications – and to be the one to come up with a plan to save his brother. Fantastic writing as always. Looking forward to the reactions of the others, especially Alan and Drake. Bee

Winning a million times over... yup, can see how escaping certain death can feel like winning a million times over. Hehe. Glad John was there.

Great two chapters! Sorry I haven't been by much lately. Been busy too. Looking forward to the next chapter, and if we don't see you ahead of time: Merry Christmas and a Blessed 2012!