Hey hey hey not really liking where this story is going. It looks to me like a Joanna/Lena/Tory slash fic. For goodness' sakes, they're only four years old! Seriously. Stop with the slash. I mean, really, not cool. But all the other chapters were great!

Please please finish this story it's so good you had me hooked from the start

Please update again soon this is amazing!

dude, like, why did you stop updating? this is awesome and perfect and amazing and i love it amd PLEASE WRITE MOOREEEE!
nik :)

its funny but not a bad thing with the cuddle, shes young

is there something with kirk and bones i feel there is

I wish there was more of this. I love this story.

I love this story! Your a great writer.

Awsome

I so adore Jo, Jim, and Bones in this. I hope you write more soon.

I really hope this story will be continued because it's the most adorable thing i have read!

I hope you continue this one day. I'm hopeful I shall keep it

Update

This is honest to god one of the best Star Trek AOS fics I've read so far; can't wait to read more!

Joanna is absolutely perfect and adorable, Bones' grumpiness to cover up his worry is spot on and just in general your writing style is amazing and wonderfully emotive arrgghhh xD

I actually teared up with Kirk's remembrance of his childhood, you played it just right so it wasn't too soppy but not dismissive of his past either; I suspect I will have some more tears in future if your going in the Tarsus IV direction...? Either way it will be great!

The bit with Jim and Bones squished on the slide together was brilliantly done, I can't wait for more awkward 'trying not to get turned on' Jim and flustered, sexy Bones :)

So uh, yeah, your fic is awesome and I'm totally in love with you via your writing style... *runs away*

ps Take your time with your writing, I honestly don't mind waiting and neither should anyone else, it's totally worth it!

I really like this story. I hope you finish it.

Damnit! Finished already. :'( Hopedit would take longer. Crap. What am I supposed to do now? Will check rest of your stories but I (and about 324 others) demand updates for this awesome story!