thank you Anna. took a while, but your amazing take/end on the incomplete movie "Legion" has drawn me in and hooked me. i only wish we could instantly access your ideas faster than you can write them down. lol. your head must be swarming with so many great stories. while i wait for more Sword of the Gods books, i will buy as many novels as i can find. book 9 next. haha

It was a long journey, but had a way to keep me interested, when normally it is hard to get me to read something longer than 20 chapters. Kudos.

Anna, I hope yo're still receiving reviews on this story. I don't know when it was written, but since I've already read the first three books of Michael's series, I assume it's been awhile. I loved this story as I have loved everything you've written that I have found. I look for more f your stories. Thank you for this.

I was so caught up in the story, I didn't see the review boxes until now. As always, I am lost in the intricate paths of Ms. Erishkigal's plot. Her mix of religious facts we have been taught and the alternate avenues she has opened are fascinating. I am not writer. If I was I could say what I mean to be better understood. As only a reader, I don't know how to express it, but I love every word I have ever read by this author.

I really do love this story. It took me four days of non-stop reading to get through it mind, but it is awesome. I love the character development throughout the many many many… many... Chapters and all the little twists and turns the story took.

"We's not going to kiss you's all asses!"

We's and you's are conjunctions of "we is" and "you is". So that sentence would normally read " We is not going to kiss you is all asses!"

There are times were you're using the slang wrong. A lot actually. It's pretty clear you aren't familiar with ethnic colloquialism because it's really inconsistent. Sometimes these "gang members" speak in "you's" and "we's" and the next sentence they're speaking perfectly clear and normal. If you are gonna have a characters talk with a particular accent, it needs to be consistant and actually be used properly for the reader to find it believable. Right now it just looks like a silly attemp at using a hispanic/African American accent without really knowing how they speak.

This might sound harsh, but I'm not meaning it to. Just speaking my thoughts. The way you are trying to describe the gang setting bugged me a bit with the "Barrios" and West Side in New Mexico...

Gah! I definitely need to get this now _ And I fully intend to next paycheck, or the one after if I have to wait.

Since it says I already reviewed the last chapter, even though I cannot find the review, and won't let me review it again, I am going to leave my review here:

Once again, I am overwhelmed with emotion by the ending of this wonderful fic. I don't know why I never reviewed the end of it the last time I read it but... wow. Just wow. I have bookmarked it and will no doubt read it again and again until such time as it is no longer available, if it ever gets published into your other universe. If and when that happens, I will be buying it, as I intend to also buy your Sword of God series, as well as Angel of Death: A Love Story. You have a wonderful talent, thank you for sharing it with the rest of us.

I admit, reading through this is bringing back fond memories of when I read it first, and making it hard to stop to go to work _ The emotions it pulled from me when Audrey returned to their apartment after 15 years, ouch. I could almost -feel- her sorrow.

Wow, I don;t know if I caught this the first time I read the fic but... you changed the name of Lena's partner. In chapter 26 his name was Eddie. Now its Lenny. That's a bit of an oops I think. I am just as addicted to reading it this second time around as I was when my other half found it and linked to me it back in 2012...and I cannot believe I never reviewed it beyond them meeting the Rabbi O.o

Wow damn I really hope they forgive Gabriel I know it was part his fault but come on he's making amends he's trying.

she was really passed off I wonder how she will handle things when Gabriel is gone for good.

Wow this is deep, poor Gabriel my heart hurts for him.

Wow that was intense I was on edge the entire time.

I can't tell you how much I loved this book. It...changed the way I think about certain things. I've recommended it to everyone I know who reads fanfiction.