I ship this so hard now.

Amazing work. I love the pairing3 Your writing style fits them perfectly.

Wow... this almost seemed a little OOC for Barrett, but then I remembered that Barrett always had feelings for Dorothy; he was just a tad kuudere (or maybe even tsundere :P ), so the whole "I'm not blushing. I'm not blushing. I'm not- okay, yes, I'm blushing" was golden XD. This was a great story.
And am I the only one who thinks it sucks that you only get to see Dorothy's eyes when you marry her, but not thereafter?

Fantastic story ! im always a dorothy and barrett fan since barrett is hot and dorothy is cute. The way of telling the story is excellent GOOD job! i look forward more to your stories

Cute story!

Cute :)

This story is amazing, love it so muchies 3 c:

I love it! I would like to write a story about Barrett and Dorothy as kids too.

Hi! Can you add more to this story? It's REALLY good! and cute! Anyway thanks! Awesome story!

That was really cute