Reviews for Once in a Lifetime |
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rinayukina chapter 1 . 9/26/2016 Wish there was more, even though I'm more of a YukioxRin fan rather than RinxYukio...:) |
lulu422 chapter 2 . 6/26/2014 Ohhhhhhhhh nice poem. Any chance of a sequel to the reaction yukio has when he finds out he made out with his brother |
Sasukeluva 4eva chapter 2 . 5/31/2013 Loved it. Well done. Rin |
Guest chapter 2 . 3/25/2013 Nice! |
deans42ndfreckle chapter 1 . 7/14/2012 Loved this! You should continue it :D |
SignatureSinful chapter 1 . 5/27/2012 As all your other reviewers have said, I too second that you should continue this. The element of mystery to it is so big that it begs for continuation, no? As I highly doubt that will happen, here's what I think happened: Yukio and Rin are brothers. They were separated when they were younger (not sure why or when) and as such haven't seen eachother for a while so recognising eachother wouldn't be instantaneous. Yukio became a bit more introverted without Rin and so one of his only friends, Shura, dragged him out. Rin and Yukio kiss. Yukio feels as if he knows him from somewhere and that is why he is upset at Rin leaving, it's a bit like deja vu. And then he figures out it's Rin, his brother. Soo, that's what my imagination supplied me with. But it'd be so much better if you wrote more |
KatanaYukii chapter 1 . 11/9/2011 This is wonderful! I really enjoy your writing style and the plot. Though... it feels like there should be much more. Is that all there is, or will you ever intend on continuing? At any rate, thank-you for the lovely read (B |
SelfcreatedCharacter chapter 1 . 10/20/2011 Good God! Where's the next chapter? Ah! Yukio is so amusing! Rin! This plot line is good, so continue it! |
Dishon chapter 1 . 10/9/2011 I like it, It's well-written and I didn't found any spelling mistakes. But I'm a bit confused. Is Rin his brother? If he is, then it's a bit odd, Yukio didn't recognize him after he saw his face... |
California'sDream chapter 1 . 8/2/2011 Nice x) |
Jay Rowan chapter 1 . 7/26/2011 LMAO and you can just call me XD |
sakura-fai chapter 1 . 7/20/2011 Who's Yukio's brother then? Mephisto? And you're not gonna continuethe fanfic? ;) Haha, I love it, too bad it's never gonna happen... And the line: "and you can just call me" :O That's a great pickup line. XD |
xBunni chapter 1 . 7/11/2011 Nice fic, but just a tad confused, Yukio does mention he has a brother here, but is Rin his brother here? Because it's a bit odd that he doesn't recognize his own brother when they make out and his face is right in front of him. |
Ily711 chapter 1 . 6/18/2011 No! That was completely a-frickin-mazing please continue the story I really want to find out what happens next. Anyway great writing _ |
Platypus-Mastermind chapter 1 . 6/12/2011 ! *SQUEAL SQUEAL* ANOTHER CHAPTER, ANOTHER CHAPTER! COMPLETE? WHAT'CHA TALKIN' ABOUT FOOL! THAT AIN'T COMPLETE! More pleeeeeease :D |