Reviews for Between the Lines
belindalovesmiz chapter 3 . 4/7/2016
any chance of updating?
oh-the-irony-13 chapter 3 . 7/27/2011
YAY! Samcedes is one of my all time favorite couples! Loved the chapter. Update soon!
emzjuk chapter 3 . 7/27/2011
Cute cute cute! I like the idea of Sam being behind the prom on a budget idea. And i love the flirting!
Jadziwine chapter 2 . 6/7/2011
omg how didn't i read this and review before? i was desperate for someone to write a story dealing with Mercedes' angst and lonliness and that she'd probably have gotten so scarred with boys at Mckinley that she wouldn't even dare to have a crush on any of them anymore. and YOU FRIGGING DID THAT! and brilliantly too I must add! please update soon! xoxo
sariahos chapter 2 . 6/7/2011
1. Sams last name is Evans. 2. I FREAKING LOVED THIS. IT'S ONE OF THE BEST SAMCEDES I READ AND IF YOU DON'T UPDATE SOON I WILL CRY. So please update soon :)
got2luvmel chapter 2 . 6/7/2011
LMBO normally I'd be gushing over how sweet Sam is about being so scared just trying to tell Cedes that he likes her, but he comes off as a pansy. I can't stop laughing at how sorry he looks HAHAHAHA

I'm happy that slap wasn't a part of this fiction, and I'm glad you put in the missing scene btwn St. Berry after they got out of the prom. I like that Rachel still was more concerned about ruining Samcedes night than worry about her own troubles.

I actually really love all of the awkward moments Samcedes have; like when she took her arm from his and then when he said he wanted to walk her up, her wondering why he'd go through so much trouble for her and the flattening of her dress to avoid gazing in his eyes... IDK all that just made it more realistic for me.

"Rachel had Jesse, or Finn, or Puck or Jesse." Too bad Rachel never acknowledges that she has choices.

Mercedes being so down is fucking depressing. I hope the next chapters show her in a lighter mind frame cause that was such a downer Jeez! However, I love how when Sam finally spoke up they had this knowing between them like they could read each other's thoughts.

What is Sam's surname? For the life of me I know that I've never known, but I'm pretty sure its not Hudson. Anywho, I'm looking forward to Mercedes finally getting that kiss, thanks for writing, sharing and deciding to continue XD Mel
Isis Aurora Tomoe chapter 2 . 6/7/2011
Ack! Cliffie? Oh my...I liked the chapter, can't wait for more!
oh-the-irony-13 chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
Uh, this isn't it, right? Please tell me its not over! It was great!
mzsj chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
This is good, but the ending is rather abrupt. Are you going to turn this into a multi-chapter, or is this it? :o)
AbiSnocom chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
I really loved this! I think it is sooo cute how Sam is so nervous lol It's adorable...and it's cute that Mercedes has no idea how nervous he is. Please update soon! I want more! Thanks for writing! :)
Hearts4Cloud chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
I love it, please continue.
weasleymadchen chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
omg i need more!
got2luvmel chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
I should begin this review by bowing down to you for actually attempting to beta your work before posting it as most of the Samcedes writers do not. With the exception to never using comas before your end quotes and a few spelling and grammar errors it was nearly perfect. If I don't say thank you for anything else, thanks for in the least for looking this over before posting.

It's so adorbs that he wanted Mercedes to be jealous, he likes her even before the Prom night...love that.

Rachel is a hot mess for her comments but I couldn't stop laughing. The idea that Sam was actually behind their "Prom On A Budget" makes it even more sweeter than it actually was on the show. I really liked this fiction, it was great. Thanks for writing and sharing -Mel
Farie Insignias chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
That was beautiful. It felt like something full of promise, like the start of something special. I especially love that you didn't rush the romance. It was realistic. I could believe that he was secretely having these thoughts during the episode. Great job!