Not sure if you know about the new pairing feature, but you should consider marking this as a pairing between Loki and Thor so that people looking for fics with a Loki/Thor pairing will find your story to read. :)

This is a wonderful piece, so beautiful, and sad too. Poor Loki.

Beautifully written. Gorgeous detail and character depth. Well, well done.

-Q

Poignant and wrenching chronicle of a young man discovering his sexuality in a society that oppresses any such thing... with all the additional twists and headaches and heartaches of being Loki, of course. I can see his viewpoint quite well, too. Thor falls head over heels for a woman (a *mortal* woman) he just met, while his devoted brother pined away? Yeah, I'll bet part of him was just thrilled that Thor's heart broke as he fell - at least it meant he HAD some grip on Thor's heart. Poor kid. What a mess.

fall s over

and

cries

forever

what are my feelings doinG

I finally watched this movie a week ago, and came across this as I was revisiting my favorite authors. And all I can say is ohmygodyouaresofantasticaaaah! Not very eloquent of me, I know, but this was just so perfect! I love your writing so much and the characterization and thoughts were beautiful. So just thankyou for writing :)

lessthanthree

Rachel

This was such an amazing fic!

aww how sad! DX

This was awesome. I really enjoyed reading it. :)

As I was watching this movie, my thoughts went along similar lines as to Loki's thoughts. Especially with the awkward-calf-caress that happens near the beginning. XD

this was truly a wonderful and heartbreaking story.

oh, this breaks my heart! The ending is brilliant and completely believable. Wow... great job.

Wow. Just, wow. I'm not usually one for slash, and initialy the idea of Thor and Loki was bleh. Then I read this.

Your writing style is fantastic, and you played it out in such a way that ot could be canon. Mentioning that single tear of his at the end of the movie... Not many have noticed or remarked on that.

All in all, this was beautifully done, and thank you for making it believable.

This was so beautifully written! The last line literally took my breath away and I just had to read it over and over again who knows how many times. Great work!

Poor Loki. You kept him true to character, thought. I love his sarcasm and his often violent thoughts (is it wrong that I find them so funny?). Anyway, lovely writing.