Nooooo replace kingler and swellow

The concept of this story is good. I think the story itself is excellent.

I think your grammar and spelling need to be corrected slightly.

Doesn't Ash have the badges of Pewter and Cerulean already from his first adventures? Why would anyone need two?

This is great so far. All i have to say is keep up the great work and update soon! :)

great concept and a great story and i love how your going big scale, but can you please continue, the wait is killing me

not a lot of people reviewing cuz not a lot of people know of this story and or red cuz he's older also it only has 1 chapter the big the story is the more poeple will see it and read it also when u get more chapters people will review more

Huh?

I wonder why there only 2 reviews this is a great story with an even greater plot

It's good to see you're aiming to write a story huge-scale. Everyone is going to be in the story? I hope you manage the story well lol I totally agree that the anime is being unreasonable with Ash and Pikachu getting reset to their very first-selves everytime they go to a new region :)