Reviews for The Missionary's Adventure |
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panguin.taylor chapter 2 . 6/26/2012 OH MY GOD PLEASE WRITE MORE! |
foureyesfreak27 chapter 1 . 3/25/2012 PLZ continue |
rachie.w chapter 2 . 10/1/2011 lovin the resque (sp.?) mission so far cant wait for next chapter :) |
firefly chapter 2 . 9/29/2011 you haven't updated in a while. |
Kiwien chapter 2 . 7/1/2011 Funny and moving - love it! Please update soon... :) |
A Person chapter 2 . 6/12/2011 Keep going! |
HalfBrachenDemon chapter 2 . 6/7/2011 Awesome start to the story! :) It's looking very good so far; can't wait for more! |
Aria DeLoncray chapter 2 . 5/31/2011 I love how your Tamara isn't a scary sister for Syrena. And Jack's hilarious! Can't wait for the next chapter. |
Finally chapter 2 . 5/30/2011 A story that shows that the other mermaids have humanity in them as well. I will continue now. |
Mellybean23 chapter 2 . 5/29/2011 This is fantastic. The only thing is that I wish the chapters were a bit longer. But still, good job! |
jasmineyeo chapter 2 . 5/25/2011 nice. :) |
Silver Wolf 626 chapter 2 . 5/24/2011 Keep on writing! I can't wait to read more! |
Shadows.in.the.moon chapter 2 . 5/24/2011 awww, syrena! hehe update soon yea? |
ableon chapter 2 . 5/24/2011 Damn that cliffhanger. XD I want more please :) You write very well, but may I suggest adding more detail describing the setting and actions of the characters. Just a tad bit more :) but that;s just my preference. |
DitzyBrunette89 chapter 2 . 5/24/2011 Ohhhh I like how you made Syrena and Tamara friendly towards each other in almost every other fic I have read Syrena is always scared of Tamara but Yay on the chapter I cant wait for an update |