Reviews for The Missionary's Adventure
panguin.taylor chapter 2 . 6/26/2012
OH MY GOD PLEASE WRITE MORE!
foureyesfreak27 chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
PLZ continue
rachie.w chapter 2 . 10/1/2011
lovin the resque (sp.?) mission so far

cant wait for next chapter :)
firefly chapter 2 . 9/29/2011
you haven't updated in a while.
Kiwien chapter 2 . 7/1/2011
Funny and moving - love it!

Please update soon... :)
A Person chapter 2 . 6/12/2011
Keep going!
HalfBrachenDemon chapter 2 . 6/7/2011
Awesome start to the story! :) It's looking very good so far; can't wait for more!
Aria DeLoncray chapter 2 . 5/31/2011
I love how your Tamara isn't a scary sister for Syrena. And Jack's hilarious! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Finally chapter 2 . 5/30/2011
A story that shows that the other mermaids have humanity in them as well. I will continue now.
Mellybean23 chapter 2 . 5/29/2011
This is fantastic. The only thing is that I wish the chapters were a bit longer. But still, good job!
jasmineyeo chapter 2 . 5/25/2011
nice. :)
Silver Wolf 626 chapter 2 . 5/24/2011
Keep on writing! I can't wait to read more!
Shadows.in.the.moon chapter 2 . 5/24/2011
awww, syrena! hehe update soon yea?
ableon chapter 2 . 5/24/2011
Damn that cliffhanger. XD I want more please :) You write very well, but may I suggest adding more detail describing the setting and actions of the characters. Just a tad bit more :) but that;s just my preference.
DitzyBrunette89 chapter 2 . 5/24/2011
Ohhhh I like how you made Syrena and Tamara friendly towards each other in almost every other fic I have read Syrena is always scared of Tamara but Yay on the chapter I cant wait for an update
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