WHAT?

*SLAPS NARU HARD CURSING AND YELLING AT HIM BEFORE PUNCHING HIS FACE HEAD STIMACH AND KICKS HIS NETHER REGIONS HARD BEFORE KICKING HIS STOMACH* HA! YOU DESERVE THIS FOR THE PAIN YOUVE CAUSE MAI AND HER DARLING CHILDREN AND FUCK YOU NARU ONE MORE FUCKING DAMN WRONG THING YOU DO IM GONNA FUCKING MURDER YOU MYSELF AND I HOPE THAT AUTHORSAN WOULD MAKE NARU ADMIT HIS MISTAKES AND LOVE MAI AND THE KIDS(HE DOESNT DESERVE TO BE CALLED A FATHER YET!) AND GET MARRIED TO MAI AND NEVER CHEAT ON HER AND FOREVER LOVE AND PROTECT HER AND THE KIDS FROM HARM

update please?

I loved the story. it was a great read. I wouldn't mind reading more of it, but don't push it writers block can be a pain even if it takes years it's still gonna be here for you to finish it you need a break from it.

So, I've really enjoyed this! :) I just love the way you've written this. Maybe I missed something, I don't know, but what happened to Naru's so called fiancee?

Y aura t il une suite

Plz dont i love this story

Please update! This is One of my fav ghost hunt story!
plz do update soon :)

OMG its a beautiful story /

I like your story and I think its really good, but I learned from some one else to just write and don't even think about it and don't re read it. And when your done if you don't like it change the parts you don't like or if you don't like the whole thing throw it away and re do the whole story

Please go on I like it...

what a interesting story

I want to say i'm really enjoying this story. A few things are bothering me: first and foremost, Keiko existing seemingly only for the purpose of an "other female" to bash. This just doesn't sit well with me. Second, Noll is quite out of character. Even if it has been years, even in the glimpses of a more canon time you gave us, he is very insulting to Mai. He has never been particularly nice but he is definitely bordering on abusive with his insults. The worst we actually see from him in the series is him calling her a dummy, and even then not in a malicious way as he does in this story. The children are absolutely adorable, as are Noll's interactions with them. Their personalities seem to be a bit inconsistent in that at times they act way older than they should for their age. Even if they are very intelligent, at times they act in ways that are a bit too far fetched and mature to be believable. Despite these criticisms I AM enjoying this a lot and will be looking forward to your updates!

Hiya :) I know im a little late but I do want to encourage you to continue writing you have an amzing writing style and the story is beautiful I love it and the twins and cant wait to see where goes! . take your time writting it and folow your own advise you gave through Mai ;) it will help when you need it... also again a little late I am sorry to hear about your mother I don't really know what else to say except stay strong and know she loves you.
With love,
Lady Merp

Hey what happened with Keiko?