Reviews for Harry Potter and the Alteran Legacy
kewr69 chapter 3 . 6/25
since it has been seven years, I guess you have abandoned this story. that sucks as it was just starting to get good.
Gman310508 chapter 3 . 1/13/2019
After five years I take it this is a dead story please can you remove it as it leads to disappointment as it leads it's self to a good start to a promising story says you are working on it and nothing.
Arsenal chapter 2 . 6/23/2018
Hetmione, ugh, yuck. Why does it have to be her?
Guest chapter 3 . 6/19/2017
so...basically never removed then? k got it.
ScarletRainbow1 chapter 3 . 1/6/2016
I enjoyed this. Please, are you going to continue the story?
ASTRALGEEK chapter 3 . 6/17/2015
This has no been updated since Jan. 14 2013. Will you update futher?
SilverWolf1963 chapter 3 . 5/24/2014
Have you abandoned this story?
WhiteElfElder chapter 3 . 1/3/2014
Interesting so far. I wonder if the information dump would unlock any extra abilities within Harry other than the knowledge and skills with technology?
WhiteElfElder chapter 2 . 1/3/2014
Welcome Alice, to Wonderland!
Artur Hawkwing1 chapter 3 . 11/17/2013
Hope you havn't abandoned this fic yet. looking forward to more. Your fast approaching the one year mark.
powermachine79 chapter 3 . 5/10/2013
Well didn't see many faults with ch 2 but u are the author so i won't argue looking forward to reading more soon :)
Arthorius chapter 3 . 4/18/2013
Interesting premise, but seems a little too rush and harry is way too young to know adult stuff, common mistakes among fanfic crossovers is making harry to mature and adult like which leads to abandon storylines...

Storyline does have some potential but needs to avoid lot of pitfalls that can crop up when writing a crossover.
sdoyle1989 chapter 3 . 4/12/2013
well heres an idea how about hermione get th brain download too then well i dont know but keep it up it is great!
sdoyle1989 chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
great story keep it up!
Mythrandir chapter 2 . 4/3/2013
Its a nice story,

But harry is far to trusting to some people, to ollivander he is like i cant tell you is a top secret and stuff. Just with a material, with cover up could be from a meteorite.

To hermoine (complete stranger, where are the parents bye the way?) come on i show you alien stuff of the most advanced race ever. It doesnt add up one way or another. And hermoine is far to trusting..

The base idea is nice but the end package isnt realy good. I hope you are able to improve the story, maybe rewrite the chapter?

I hope you can do something with the tips :)
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