Reviews for White Walls
Lily chapter 1 . 11/27/2019
I read this exactly a year ago. I went to check the reviews to see if i had already read it and it turns out it was exactly one year ago
Guest chapter 14 . 1/15/2019
Fic is too emo. You gave Naruto multiple psychological disorders, in addition to making him suicidal, in addition to making him a victim of child sexual abuse. On top of that, his relationship with his mother is crap and he never gets better. In the epilogue, he's a sex-addicted prostitute who uses drugs. Sex and drugs are his ways of self-medicating. He's still just as lost as he was when the fic started, he's just not suicidal anymore. Or maybe he still is and him killing himself is how the 3rd epilogue would have ended if you'd written it. Both Sasuke and Naruto have bad feelings about their upcoming reunion, which means it won't end well.

WTF are we supposed to be getting out of this story?

Can't be romance since the romance was so rushed I never believed Sasuke and Naruto actually liked each other. Worse than that, the romance between Sasuke and Suigetsu in this second epilogue chapter is genuine and really good for the both of them. In one chapter, it ends up being much better than anything that happened between Sasuke and Naruto. Am I really supposed to hope that Sasuke will break it off with Suigetsu so he can get with a mess like Naruto? How is that a happy ending for anyone but Naruto? Sasuke has finally gotten his life together, Naruto would only drag him down. But maybe that's your point since both epilogues end with Naruto and Sasuke having a bad feeling about seeing each other. Oh boy, something to look forward to.

To be honest, the more interesting story is the one that was started and never finished in this epilogue. Everything that happened in the main part of the fic was emo and uninteresting. Didn't care about seeing Naruto act like a weak, kicked puppy or Sasuke being a constant ball of rage who fell for Naruto just because. Two people (who once had feelings for each other but have since moved on) suddenly reuniting is a good premise for a fic since you don't know how their reunion will go. What if it hurts the progress they've both made? What if it helps them? What if there are no feelings between them anymore? What if only one still has feelings while the other doesn't? What if they both do? Compared to that, the main fic was just wangst.
Lily chapter 1 . 11/28/2018
I wanna give poor Naruto a hug!
Last-Queen chapter 14 . 9/20/2018
I really love you story and hoped so long that you would update.
Maybe you will. I just want to know how it ends
KURAMAX chapter 14 . 6/13/2018
I Swear I don't get kushina at all•_•
& since the voice inside naruto's head is like his own voice,i assume that was menma

These 2's future are kinda disturbing... Especially naruto; poor him, he haven't been fixed at all eh?
Meanwhile,sasuke is... U know I'm speechless when I found out that he & suigetsu are fucking dating

Just what the flying fuck is wrong with those 2?1
Orange Shine chapter 9 . 1/30/2018
Where the hell did the romance come from. Naru and Sasu haven't had enough interaction for Sasuke to be in love. Like 3 conversations happened. I read this chapter and could swear that I must've skipped a few.
blastberry chapter 1 . 8/1/2017
Please keep going if you can, I'm still rooting for the finish!
Sasunaru chapter 14 . 6/10/2017
What! I want a sasunaru end. Why don't write in the summary that this story isn't a sasunaru final?
emowoods205 chapter 1 . 4/8/2017
omg you need to update this book soon
emowoods205 chapter 13 . 3/13/2017
please update soon please please please
emowoods205 chapter 14 . 2/26/2017
please update this you simply must it's such a great story and I'd love to see the ending I really don't care if they end up together or not I just want my baby Naru to have some closure maybe meet a nice guy and Sasuke to move on with his life and go back to his job afterwards I will continue reviewing on this as much as I can to get you to update
emowoods205 chapter 14 . 2/24/2017
crap but it says this is a completed story and I was really looking forward to it ughhhh whyyyyyyy!?
emowoods205 chapter 13 . 2/24/2017
This by far this one chapter of Naruto being fucking smexy asf and just seductive and badass has made this story my top story ever that I've read and trust me honey I've read many but this by far is the best one ever
niki43709 chapter 14 . 2/11/2017
Y el final?
Guest chapter 14 . 6/28/2016
It's been about two years. I was hoping to have read the last chapter by now. This story is really good, don't leave it as a cliff hanger.
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