Reviews for Finding a loophole in an Alpha order |
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![]() ![]() Update please. |
![]() ![]() See you wrote "To be continued" however it is 4 years later and still nothing has been updated this is the tenth time I have read this story over the past few years waiting diligently for an update but there is still no update. UPDATE! I am not creative enough to have this continue in my brain. I do not care if you are not into twilight any longer you need to do something with this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg! Please! Please! Add another chapter! I'm sitting on pins and needles here! Much love... |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE finish this story! This is too good to leave languishing in a virtual desk drawer. I've been hooked by this impossible love affair and am burning for more. If you're unable to finish it yourself for some reason or other, please consider letting someone adopt it. I'm ready to try taking a crack at it myself; that's how desperate I am for a continuation. It's too good to abandon and I hope you update it as soon as you feel like it. Thank you for listening. |
![]() ![]() plz continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! Hot as all hell. Can't wait for the actual sex cause this was just to much. Very visual, very feeling, very just very DAMN. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue! I'm dying for it here! Its been almost a year. About 11 months. Please Please update, its an amazing story, and i would really like to know what happens in it. Please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just discovered this and hope you plan to continue it at some point. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this story please update soon |
![]() ![]() Please please try and update this soon! The story line is awesome! |
![]() ![]() I love it all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, I hope Jared chooses Paul and that chapter is soon! By the title, I thought this would have happened a little differently, but I like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please, please, PLEASE continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow just wow update soon please xxx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update this plze |